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Array ( [sid] => 75281 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I look At You And Fall Inlove [time] => 2004-12-11 02:25:51 [hometext] => This is a poem I just finished and it is like 3:35 AM here well comments are welcome and always appreciared [bodytext] =>
Every time I look at your face I just fall in love again and I feel risen

I feel so many things when I see you I can’t explain all of them

I just want to wrap you in my arms and just hold you there for all eternity

Just looking at you there as if trapped in a gaze and loving you entirely

Makes me feel like I can never feel anything but bliss

Then when your lips meet mine in this amazing kiss

I feel just that, as if I were swimming in pools of bliss, the kind that angels miss

Then when we part your eyes meet mine like lips they take all my breath away

Your eyes are like a bird diving into the ocean of my soul setting all the wrong astray

Changing everything in me for the better shifting the path the current takes

You have given me everything I could ever as when I had nothing at stake

Nothing to live for nothing to lose always feeling tattered broken and used

You are my hopes my dreamer and I too dream of you because you are my muse

You are my world my life my every source of substance

I will always tell you how much I love you I will never miss a chance

I will show you my world and that everything beautiful in it is a piece of you

You are the light that shines unceasingly within me showing out brilliant and true

I want so hard to show you through my words what you meant to me

But I never feel like it is enough to truly describe your truest beauty

The way I can see your wings and honesty in what makes you whole

The way that I can find a means to strengthen my heart in your soul

I never want to hurt you or ever let you go

You are what I want most in life and I just wanted you to know
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I look At You And Fall Inlove

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:25:51 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




Every time I look at your face I just fall in love again and I feel risen

I feel so many things when I see you I can’t explain all of them

I just want to wrap you in my arms and just hold you there for all eternity

Just looking at you there as if trapped in a gaze and loving you entirely

Makes me feel like I can never feel anything but bliss

Then when your lips meet mine in this amazing kiss

I feel just that, as if I were swimming in pools of bliss, the kind that angels miss

Then when we part your eyes meet mine like lips they take all my breath away

Your eyes are like a bird diving into the ocean of my soul setting all the wrong astray

Changing everything in me for the better shifting the path the current takes

You have given me everything I could ever as when I had nothing at stake

Nothing to live for nothing to lose always feeling tattered broken and used

You are my hopes my dreamer and I too dream of you because you are my muse

You are my world my life my every source of substance

I will always tell you how much I love you I will never miss a chance

I will show you my world and that everything beautiful in it is a piece of you

You are the light that shines unceasingly within me showing out brilliant and true

I want so hard to show you through my words what you meant to me

But I never feel like it is enough to truly describe your truest beauty

The way I can see your wings and honesty in what makes you whole

The way that I can find a means to strengthen my heart in your soul

I never want to hurt you or ever let you go

You are what I want most in life and I just wanted you to know




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Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove (User Rating: 1 )
by tawnii on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:22:50 AM AEST
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NIce poem keep it up mate! well done. please can you look at my poems because i am a new member and i don't know if my poems are good thanx.
Shauni


Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove (User Rating: 1 )
by carmen_queasy on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:11:08 AM AEST
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Nice poem =) I liked the imagery that came with it.


Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 06:53:31 AM AEST
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you do really write some loving stuff, eachj one leaves me with a big smile on my face

pixie xx


Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 11:55:34 AM AEST
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Sweet


Re: I look At You And Fall Inlove (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 09:12:38 PM AEST
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lovely as always.




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