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Array ( [sid] => 7528 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => the me inside of me [time] => 2002-11-27 00:00:00 [hometext] => self-explanatory [bodytext] => no one can see,
no one can hear,
the me inside of me,
shes a different person,
than ill ever be,
she is the things that i will never be,
she is never shown,
to this outside world,
she will never know,
this twisted globe,
to keep her caged,
deep inside,
is beyond hard,
and it is breaking me apart.
i long to be her,
for her to be me,
i wish that we could trade places,
so that this world could see.
but she doesnt deserve that,
she wouldnt understand,
why all the people wouldnt even shake her hand,
why all the people are heartless and rude,
why no one even smiles,
she would die in a very short while,
she is an innocent thing,
unknown to this world,
unknown to me,
but unknown she will remain,
cause she is,
that me inside of me. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 225 [topic] => 32 [informant] => nightrider [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
the me inside of me

Contributed by nightrider on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



no one can see,
no one can hear,
the me inside of me,
shes a different person,
than ill ever be,
she is the things that i will never be,
she is never shown,
to this outside world,
she will never know,
this twisted globe,
to keep her caged,
deep inside,
is beyond hard,
and it is breaking me apart.
i long to be her,
for her to be me,
i wish that we could trade places,
so that this world could see.
but she doesnt deserve that,
she wouldnt understand,
why all the people wouldnt even shake her hand,
why all the people are heartless and rude,
why no one even smiles,
she would die in a very short while,
she is an innocent thing,
unknown to this world,
unknown to me,
but unknown she will remain,
cause she is,
that me inside of me.




Copyright © nightrider ... [ 2002-11-27 00:00:00]
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Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by OreO on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 01:20:40 AM AEST
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This is great, I enjoyed the
way you write about you inside of
you, it's unique and has a style of
it's own, Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.


Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by nightrider on Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 07:04:17 PM AEST
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I remember writing things like this...eventually, you will let her out, and she will understand that although others may not see her eye to eye, at least she is free...and she will love it.


Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Thursday, 28th November 2002 @ 02:50:22 AM AEST
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always show the world the real u. masks and things will only make things worse and make life seem so false


Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by frozensuicide on Saturday, 7th December 2002 @ 08:11:41 PM AEST
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this is pretty good too! i liiiike em! go deborah go! i know the feeling. going through the saaaame thing riiiiiiiiight now. it suuuuuucks....


Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by angelrae on Wednesday, 11th December 2002 @ 06:15:06 PM AEST
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What a wonderful way of seeing you, that people will not see. A very special poem, a beautiful piece. Thank you for sharing this poem with me.


Re: the me inside of me (User Rating: 1 )
by TheSchroedmeister on Monday, 16th December 2002 @ 10:38:40 PM AEST
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Not bad at all.




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