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Array ( [sid] => 75277 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Are you out there? [time] => 2004-12-11 02:01:30 [hometext] => The game final fantasy X-2 inspired me to write this. [bodytext] => 2 years have passed since you disappeared,
i don't know if your gone for good, or if you are out there.

I will travel around the world,
just to see your face again.
I will search for you sky high,
just to hear your voice again.
I will look deep in the ocean,
just to kiss your face again.

I ask people who know you to help me find you,
but all they tell me is " He is gone for good".
When people explain to me that it would be impossible for you to be found,
I cry my heart out !!

2 years have passed since you disappeared,
and i don't care what people think but i know you are out there!! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 221 [topic] => 43 [informant] => tawnii [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Are you out there?

Contributed by tawnii on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:01:30 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

2 years have passed since you disappeared,
i don't know if your gone for good, or if you are out there.

I will travel around the world,
just to see your face again.
I will search for you sky high,
just to hear your voice again.
I will look deep in the ocean,
just to kiss your face again.

I ask people who know you to help me find you,
but all they tell me is " He is gone for good".
When people explain to me that it would be impossible for you to be found,
I cry my heart out !!

2 years have passed since you disappeared,
and i don't care what people think but i know you are out there!!

Copyright © tawnii ... [ 2004-12-11 02:01:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Are you out there? (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:32:30 AM AEST
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i love all ff games and i love this poem

Re: Are you out there? (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 08:21:30 AM AEST
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Wow shauni!!!
You're a dark horse! I know nothing about final fantasy but this was very good, welcome to my other family, you'll love it here.

See you soon,

Ali xx

Re: Are you out there? (User Rating: 1 )
by Dan666 on Sunday, 12th December 2004 @ 01:52:05 PM AEST
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Hi Shauni its me Dan

very exellent poem you do have a natural talent and you are good with your words

well done

Daniel

Dan666

Re: Are you out there? (User Rating: 1 )
by Gemz_World on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:54:42 PM AEST
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Well done shauni, love the poem hope u like myn luv gemma

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