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Array ( [sid] => 75269 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => man-made wonderland [time] => 2004-12-11 00:35:31 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You brought me to my knees... Loved me with your goodbyes...
Kill me with your "love you always."
Make me believe in you again... with your siloutted mountains...
Your lakes and your trees.
Make my follow you... into your lies.
Take me down, down to place you created to be safe.
A place where nothing can harm us no more.
A place beyond the neverland... beyond death.
Far from life, far from pain.
That safe place, beyond the edge of reason.
A place where there's snow... but it's never cold.
A place with only you and me.
Only a place we know, a place we go...
A place we die. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 13 [informant] => surge_joebot [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

man-made wonderland

Contributed by surge_joebot on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:35:31 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

You brought me to my knees... Loved me with your goodbyes...
Kill me with your "love you always."
Make me believe in you again... with your siloutted mountains...
Your lakes and your trees.
Make my follow you... into your lies.
Take me down, down to place you created to be safe.
A place where nothing can harm us no more.
A place beyond the neverland... beyond death.
Far from life, far from pain.
That safe place, beyond the edge of reason.
A place where there's snow... but it's never cold.
A place with only you and me.
Only a place we know, a place we go...
A place we die.

Copyright © surge_joebot ... [ 2004-12-11 00:35:31]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: man-made wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:44:54 AM AEST
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I just want to say you are not a fool and I never look at the topic anyway.. this was a great write..

Re: man-made wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 01:15:56 AM AEST
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awesome write again!!

peace and hope
JENNI

Re: man-made wonderland (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Wednesday, 2nd March 2005 @ 07:18:22 AM AEST
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Good poem

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