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Array ( [sid] => 75261 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Forgotten Me [time] => 2004-12-10 21:57:05 [hometext] => Its not to bad, not my best work, but i think you will enjoy. [bodytext] => the crack on the wall
represents the crack in my heart
intence but small
its where i fall apart


the light outside
is lit at night
so i can hide
my childish fright

for i am no longer me
my days have expired
i have changed cant you see
im no longer the one you desired


the blood on my hands
is from the forgotten me
and the anger expands
but its just a poor mans last plea
[comments] => 5 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Luka [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The Forgotten Me

Contributed by Luka on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:57:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



the crack on the wall
represents the crack in my heart
intence but small
its where i fall apart


the light outside
is lit at night
so i can hide
my childish fright

for i am no longer me
my days have expired
i have changed cant you see
im no longer the one you desired


the blood on my hands
is from the forgotten me
and the anger expands
but its just a poor mans last plea




Copyright © Luka ... [ 2004-12-10 21:57:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Forgotten Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:03:15 PM AEST
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powerful and expressive write.


Re: The Forgotten Me (User Rating: 1 )
by greeneyes on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:25:28 PM AEST
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I think you did very well in writting this.

Nancy


Re: The Forgotten Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:38:31 PM AEST
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I agree with Essentially9...It is very powerful...It's short but gets the point across...keep up the good work!
Ja Ne!
-Tsubaki


Re: The Forgotten Me (User Rating: 1 )
by DesperateSoul on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 02:42:23 AM AEST
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Very emotional and written well!!! Thanks for sharing!!! JKeep writing and keep posting always!! D.$.


Re: The Forgotten Me (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:39:10 PM AEST
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this was a powerfuly short poem and it saddend my heart. I do hope that you find the self you lost or at lest make peace with who you are.

it was very well writen and very expressev emotionaly
pleas keep writing and keep up the good work.




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