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Array ( [sid] => 75251 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Demon In Disguise [time] => 2004-12-10 20:50:29 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I don't care where you've been
don't wanna know about your life
everything that comes out of your mouth
Is tales of fantasies
and lies,
spreading your posion
a agent of mis fortune
In disguise
with a deadly kiss
that makes people cry.

No friends to wish
that you were dead
there is no one
only confused visions
banging around In your head,
you are alone most of the time
sad tears
flow
from one eye...
your only reason for living
Is to make people cry.

Now I'm gonna tell you
something
you're the cause of to much pain
and I never liked you much
so just go away,
next time you see me
don't even say hi
just keep it moving
get somebody else to cry. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 6 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

Demon In Disguise

Contributed by secretwind on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:50:29 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

I don't care where you've been
don't wanna know about your life
everything that comes out of your mouth
Is tales of fantasies
and lies,
spreading your posion
a agent of mis fortune
In disguise
with a deadly kiss
that makes people cry.

No friends to wish
that you were dead
there is no one
only confused visions
banging around In your head,
you are alone most of the time
sad tears
flow
from one eye...
your only reason for living
Is to make people cry.

Now I'm gonna tell you
something
you're the cause of to much pain
and I never liked you much
so just go away,
next time you see me
don't even say hi
just keep it moving
get somebody else to cry.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-12-10 20:50:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Demon In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:54:27 PM AEST
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powerful write. full of anger.

Re: Demon In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:16:03 PM AEST
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Very sad yet awesomely powerfull.
luv, huggs,
emy
Hang tuff, my friend.
Great writing as always.

Re: Demon In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:19:05 PM AEST
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I know someone that acts like that person speading lies and crushing for attention...she is not someone I want to be around...she tells me im a ***** and she hates me and then makes up this awful story that happened and comes crying to me saying I am her only friend. what a load of crap! this is such a spiteful poem...I LOVE IT! ^_^

Re: Demon In Disguise (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 11:52:50 AM AEST
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Very powerful,
sad write, but still very good!
I loved it.
*~givingin~*

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