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Array ( [sid] => 75249 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Room 208 [time] => 2004-12-10 20:27:01 [hometext] => [bodytext] => In Isolation
I feel so safe
I laugh I cry I endure...
It's so much easier this way
In this room
with the 4 walls.
friendship I tried
fell In love
and always get burned,
so I am finished with that
no more fantasies
no more falls.

I use to desire
the passion of loves fire
now I run for cover
no I don't need a kiss,
lies upon lies
feeling emotional all the time
very few moments of bliss.
Often I'm pausing
got to think things through
move In slow motion
gonna fall if I slip,
In this room I sit now
and wonder
how did I let it
get to be like this? [comments] => 4 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 48 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Room 208

Contributed by secretwind on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:27:01 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

In Isolation
I feel so safe
I laugh I cry I endure...
It's so much easier this way
In this room
with the 4 walls.
friendship I tried
fell In love
and always get burned,
so I am finished with that
no more fantasies
no more falls.

I use to desire
the passion of loves fire
now I run for cover
no I don't need a kiss,
lies upon lies
feeling emotional all the time
very few moments of bliss.
Often I'm pausing
got to think things through
move In slow motion
gonna fall if I slip,
In this room I sit now
and wonder
how did I let it
get to be like this?

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2004-12-10 20:27:01]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Room 208 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:42:31 PM AEST
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Very sad but written with the passion in your soul.
U r a good person that helps carry the load of this planet in his heart and on his shoulders.
U will get thru my friend 'cause u sacrifice your own life to help others.
I've only seen a fraction of what it's like out there in the big city's. It's people like u that make a difference on our planet one day at a time.
Awesome writing!
Hang tuff my frend.
Luv, huggs, prayers, faith, hope, strength, joy, peace,
emy

Re: Room 208 (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:56:05 PM AEST
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amazing write. written well and captivating.

Re: Room 208 (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:29:39 PM AEST
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wow, this is beautiful... haunting, well done

Re: Room 208 (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Friday, 3rd June 2005 @ 01:18:19 PM AEST
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Good right hun.
But remember there might be some good things about that room.
It's where I met you.
MUAH!
*~givingin~*

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