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Array ( [sid] => 75245 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Insanity's Knife [time] => 2004-12-10 19:49:14 [hometext] => I dunno really where this came from, but I'm probly gonna get bad comments and stuff...if you read it though, thats cool [bodytext] => Insanity has a knife
And through cut-up eyes
I see her
Beautiful, through all of my flaws
My faked sorrow, self-pity
For her imperfections
She was perfect
And for mine
I'm just a fake
Insanity's knife
Is my security, and
A hope for notice
For love, laughter
Love
Like positive and negative
Imperfect and perfect
Fake and beautiful
We were pulled
In an attraction
That has developed
Like a picture of the sunset
Gracing clouds with orange and pink hues
Sunset
Like light through rain drops
That shines under my thoughts
My sad, sorry, selfish thoughts
Reveries of dreams
Dreams of love
Love is not like anything
Especially a knife [comments] => 5 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eyesxcriedxout1989 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Insanity's Knife

Contributed by eyesxcriedxout1989 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:49:14 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Insanity has a knife
And through cut-up eyes
I see her
Beautiful, through all of my flaws
My faked sorrow, self-pity
For her imperfections
She was perfect
And for mine
I'm just a fake
Insanity's knife
Is my security, and
A hope for notice
For love, laughter
Love
Like positive and negative
Imperfect and perfect
Fake and beautiful
We were pulled
In an attraction
That has developed
Like a picture of the sunset
Gracing clouds with orange and pink hues
Sunset
Like light through rain drops
That shines under my thoughts
My sad, sorry, selfish thoughts
Reveries of dreams
Dreams of love
Love is not like anything
Especially a knife




Copyright © eyesxcriedxout1989 ... [ 2004-12-10 19:49:14]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Insanity's Knife (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 09:04:12 PM AEST
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good write. i guess what makes this better is the fact that you didnt try to rhyme this, because if you did you would have messed that up, or taken the poem in a new direction. the beginning reminds me of my poem, tears of rememberance, i think thats the one. because of the perfect concept.


Re: Insanity's Knife (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 10:34:48 PM AEST
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awesome, i love it


Re: Insanity's Knife (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:50:55 AM AEST
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damn dude this was amazing, especially those last two lines, you truly are one of the greatest poets in our century.


Re: Insanity's Knife (User Rating: 1 )
by theMoth on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 03:10:09 PM AEST
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It's good,
don't ask for bad comments.
Clones would make them.
You just keep writing
and strive for the best, Shemp.

--Moth


Re: Insanity's Knife (User Rating: 1 )
by Broken_Skin on Saturday, 18th December 2004 @ 08:56:38 AM AEST
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This was good, made me think....
4/5




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