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Array ( [sid] => 75214 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT [time] => 2004-12-10 16:34:28 [hometext] => This is a poem about the relationship that I have with my mom. My mom is a very difficult person to live with and no matter what I do I can not talk to her about how she makes me feel because she beats me down verbally everytime. [bodytext] => Bite my tongue and swallow my pride
Bottle it up down inside
While crying behind my eyes
My mind wanders and flies

You beat my ignorance
And scar my innocents
You stab at me
And hear me plea

I am wounded and bleeding
But you think you are succeeding
Listen to my wisdom
And diagnose my symptom

Love you do not share
And hate that can't compare
To the pain I feel
While I cry and kneel [comments] => 3 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 32 [informant] => scottishdancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT

Contributed by scottishdancer on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:34:28 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Bite my tongue and swallow my pride
Bottle it up down inside
While crying behind my eyes
My mind wanders and flies

You beat my ignorance
And scar my innocents
You stab at me
And hear me plea

I am wounded and bleeding
But you think you are succeeding
Listen to my wisdom
And diagnose my symptom

Love you do not share
And hate that can't compare
To the pain I feel
While I cry and kneel

Copyright © scottishdancer ... [ 2004-12-10 16:34:28]
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Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT (User Rating: 1 )
by karmen on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:42:57 PM AEST
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Its a good write and i like the way that you use words to rhyme. I can also relate to the subject, my mother does the same to me and makes me feel the same except mentally. I hope things get better for you.

Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:48:04 PM AEST
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Great write, my mom does me the same way.

Re: A MOTHER'S LOVE CAN HURT (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:14:46 PM AEST
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excellent write. powerful and emotional. reminds me of stainds, fade. but there will come a time where things are different, hopefully =]

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