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Then its good enough for me
Ill take back all I said and forget about us
I wont but up much fuss
Ill go home and Ill leave you alone
Ill send back all the flowers
Count down the hours
And hold back my tears

And If Im not they guy then I wont have to lie
To give us a chace to try
If hes still your man then I will give up my plan
And make my mind understand
Im so cold and I miss you so much
The stars wont shine
The sun will hide
Behind the clouds

I wish we could try
But I dont want you to lie
I hate the guy that you like
And Id bust up his bike
If I didnt love you so much

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 471 [topic] => 55 [informant] => socialburnin [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )

For you

Contributed by socialburnin on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:16:31 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems

If hes all that you want and all that you need
Then its good enough for me
Ill take back all I said and forget about us
I wont but up much fuss
Ill go home and Ill leave you alone
Ill send back all the flowers
Count down the hours
And hold back my tears

And If Im not they guy then I wont have to lie
To give us a chace to try
If hes still your man then I will give up my plan
And make my mind understand
Im so cold and I miss you so much
The stars wont shine
The sun will hide
Behind the clouds

I wish we could try
But I dont want you to lie
I hate the guy that you like
And Id bust up his bike
If I didnt love you so much

Copyright © socialburnin ... [ 2004-12-10 16:16:31]
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Re: For you (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:44:21 PM AEST
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Love is the only force that turns a regular person into a devoted martyr. Nice poem!

-Butch

Re: For you (User Rating: 1 )
by Tru2Myself on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 11:11:07 PM AEST
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This is absolutely amazing! Just take up the bust up your bike part... it makes it look like your trying to hard to ryme. not every line has to ryme. and you can find a better word if you think you it need the ryming. Its WONDERFUL I just think that line was pushing a little. Look up other words that ryme with BIKE. great write!!
Lauren

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