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Array ( [sid] => 75207 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => DEPRESSION BUILDING [time] => 2004-12-10 15:53:55 [hometext] => Soon he would explode not just on him self but on the human race. [bodytext] =>

His depression was mounting.
Building at a critical pace.
Soon he would explode not
just on him self but on the
human race.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Burning within his soul.
Thought of suicide running.

Ramped inside his all.
Nowhere is safe.

No place to call home.
Alone is his life quest.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Is this his sentence?

It's all he wishes to know?
It's all he ever known.

He ask not for help just
wishes to be left alone.

Tormented is his soul
for the evil he has done.

For the sins he's has
committed.
Not just to man but
woman alike.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Mounting is his depression.
He shall soon explode.

Demons running wild.
His heartless soul is cold.
Never has he known

The peace.
The joy.
The hope.

Of love nor dose he
want to.

Rape of his mind.
Rape of his heart.
Rape of his soul.

By both men and women
alike.
He lashes out.

Not fearing what shall
happen not caring
for himself.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Is his all he has left
to give?
He prays for death.

Rage is his quest.
Anger floods his all.
Destruction to his life
To men women an alike

By DENNIS LEMMEN

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DEPRESSION BUILDING

Contributed by lemmen on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:53:55 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

His depression was mounting.
Building at a critical pace.
Soon he would explode not
just on him self but on the
human race.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Burning within his soul.
Thought of suicide running.

Ramped inside his all.
Nowhere is safe.

No place to call home.
Alone is his life quest.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Is this his sentence?

It's all he wishes to know?
It's all he ever known.

He ask not for help just
wishes to be left alone.

Tormented is his soul
for the evil he has done.

For the sins he's has
committed.
Not just to man but
woman alike.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Mounting is his depression.
He shall soon explode.

Demons running wild.
His heartless soul is cold.
Never has he known

The peace.
The joy.
The hope.

Of love nor dose he
want to.

Rape of his mind.
Rape of his heart.
Rape of his soul.

By both men and women
alike.
He lashes out.

Not fearing what shall
happen not caring
for himself.

Rage.
Anger.
Destruction.

Is his all he has left
to give?
He prays for death.

Rage is his quest.
Anger floods his all.
Destruction to his life
To men women an alike

By DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-12-10 15:53:55]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by wakegurl77 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 07:58:55 PM AEST
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Great Write
i love the repitition
Allways Sincere
Leana

Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:57:44 PM AEST
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Deeply passionate....
Jenni

Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 11:23:07 PM AEST
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good write.

Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 07:02:16 AM AEST
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well written write, well expressed and deep,

pixie xx

Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfman on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 05:59:15 PM AEST
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Very powerful and full of emotions, I do hope that HE finds the peace he needs to save him from such a fate.

nice rythem and had a stedy flow. keep it up.

Re: DEPRESSION BUILDING (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 11:56:06 AM AEST
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Well written, well expressed, very deep and i thought this was very good.
blessed be
christina

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