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Array ( [sid] => 75139 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => With You [time] => 2004-12-10 03:30:12 [hometext] => wrote this today cause class was so boring. [bodytext] => Bloody feathers float gracefully down
Forgotten angels fall down without a sound
Our wonderous moments forgotten forever
Shaking slightly I pull the trigger

I can't believe it took me so long to realize
That there was never truth in your eyes
A sharp shot and a dull thud
Lying here alone in a pool of my blood

Now I wonder will I ever be found?
Dying here, gasping on the ground
Even with you I was alone
Slowly you turned my core to stone
My beating heart, it beats no more
I'm lying here, twisted and maimed on the floor [comments] => 4 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 61 [informant] => blueeyedevil13 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

With You

Contributed by blueeyedevil13 on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 03:30:12 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Bloody feathers float gracefully down
Forgotten angels fall down without a sound
Our wonderous moments forgotten forever
Shaking slightly I pull the trigger

I can't believe it took me so long to realize
That there was never truth in your eyes
A sharp shot and a dull thud
Lying here alone in a pool of my blood

Now I wonder will I ever be found?
Dying here, gasping on the ground
Even with you I was alone
Slowly you turned my core to stone
My beating heart, it beats no more
I'm lying here, twisted and maimed on the floor

Copyright © blueeyedevil13 ... [ 2004-12-10 03:30:12]
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Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:16:11 AM AEST
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wow, this is kinda haunting.. well done!!

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 05:13:23 AM AEST
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very well expressed, thank god the class was boring, as this amazing write came from it ...so very sad written well,

pixie xx

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:22:34 AM AEST
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Ouch. I know the feeling.
Stitch

Re: With You (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Wednesday, 5th January 2005 @ 06:39:36 AM AEST
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dunno bout wow but it was good keep em comin

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