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Array ( [sid] => 75125 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => one messed up nursery rhyme [time] => 2004-12-10 00:09:34 [hometext] => i wrote this last night when i couldent fall asleep..i like it.. plz comment [bodytext] => Run , run , run
as fast as a horse
you cant catch me
im a rotting corpse

fly away , fly away ,
fly away home
but home was broken down ,
and now im left alone

hush little baby
dont say a word
mommas gonna kill you
if she finds out what you heard

hey diddle diddle
with the cat and the fiddle
my heart jumped over the moon
the little bastard laughed
to see that she loved him
and then ran away with a spoon

and heres another bubble
i feel i need to burst
mother gooses life was *****
and was constantly getting worst
cuz' mother goose lived ,
in one ***** up shoe
everything fell apart
and there was nothing she could do

So in the end , the three little piggys
never built a brick house
they kept trying and trying to build something strong
but the wolf always blew it down...
till they got tierd of trying,
became bitter and cold
and stayed that way forever
till they died when they were old...
THE END (sAd eNdInG mUsIc) [comments] => 4 [counter] => 226 [topic] => 25 [informant] => imalive_enoughsaid [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )
one messed up nursery rhyme

Contributed by imalive_enoughsaid on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:09:34 AM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems



Run , run , run
as fast as a horse
you cant catch me
im a rotting corpse

fly away , fly away ,
fly away home
but home was broken down ,
and now im left alone

hush little baby
dont say a word
mommas gonna kill you
if she finds out what you heard

hey diddle diddle
with the cat and the fiddle
my heart jumped over the moon
the little bastard laughed
to see that she loved him
and then ran away with a spoon

and heres another bubble
i feel i need to burst
mother gooses life was *****
and was constantly getting worst
cuz' mother goose lived ,
in one ***** up shoe
everything fell apart
and there was nothing she could do

So in the end , the three little piggys
never built a brick house
they kept trying and trying to build something strong
but the wolf always blew it down...
till they got tierd of trying,
became bitter and cold
and stayed that way forever
till they died when they were old...
THE END (sAd eNdInG mUsIc)




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Re: one messed up nursery rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:23:46 AM AEST
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As strange as it is I love it. Great write.


Re: one messed up nursery rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 12:35:16 AM AEST
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I had to read this it is awsome an d i really like it very much as much as i like to touch dear i say what maybe not let me leave you with that little thought



Re: one messed up nursery rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 02:01:44 AM AEST
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Freaky and weird yet well written really enjoyed reading it and had a laugh at the way you twisted the rymes well done.


Re: one messed up nursery rhyme (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 04:34:12 PM AEST
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very strange... but really good...
i enjoyed reading this...
it was a great poem...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes




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