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Array ( [sid] => 75120 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Sweet Red [time] => 2004-12-09 22:23:13 [hometext] => This isn't about suicide or death, or even wanting to die. It's comfort in something most look down upon. [bodytext] => my soul is weary
my heart is weak
eyes heavy
ears deaf
voice mute
legs crippled
fingers stiff
thoughts blank
cannot sleep
i feel it crawling
all over my toes
dripping down
my smooth leg
spills onto the floor
drip drop drip drip
it makes its rhythm
it grows faster
there is no pain
its so euphoric...
oh look here it hurries
to the surface
oh Sweet Red
my only comfort in your world
of hate and cold [comments] => 3 [counter] => 168 [topic] => 55 [informant] => Beena [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => dedicatedpoems )
Sweet Red

Contributed by Beena on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:23:13 PM in AEST
Topic: dedicatedpoems



my soul is weary
my heart is weak
eyes heavy
ears deaf
voice mute
legs crippled
fingers stiff
thoughts blank
cannot sleep
i feel it crawling
all over my toes
dripping down
my smooth leg
spills onto the floor
drip drop drip drip
it makes its rhythm
it grows faster
there is no pain
its so euphoric...
oh look here it hurries
to the surface
oh Sweet Red
my only comfort in your world
of hate and cold




Copyright © Beena ... [ 2004-12-09 22:23:13]
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Re: Sweet Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:41:36 PM AEST
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pretty darn good i like red


Re: Sweet Red (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 11:51:09 PM AEST
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darkly beautiful. good job
rach


Re: Sweet Red (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 01:25:22 AM AEST
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i use to do reds my self stamps acid green monsters mansons and other stuff i have been clean for almost 2 years now




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