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From Dusk Till Dawn
Contributed by
ShadowsCloud
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Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Soft kisses all over you,
Fingers ran through your hair,
Sweet words from my lips,
I am so glad that I'm here.
You breath so quietly,
As you lay by my side,
Your fingers gently close my eyes,
Loving you is nothing to hide.
No words are even spoken,
Yet we are both wide awake,
It is dark as night;
I never want this silence to break.
It's almost time for me to leave,
And yet you hug me tighter,
I look deep into your eyes,
I don't want to go but outside it grows brighter
I brush my lips across your cheek,
Soon this moment will be gone,
You place one last kiss upon my forehead;
I'll never forget our moments we have from dusk till dawn.
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ShadowsCloud
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2002-11-26 18:40:00] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: From Dusk Till Dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by Unaekseveer1 on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:10:20 PM AEST (User
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Candice,
I had this dream of yours actually being reality, once upon a time that is!
This reminds me of how we actually were with each other.
So I really like your poem because it brings back the feelings of such happy days/nights with so much love in life!
Thankyou for sharing this with all Candice, it's beautiful!
With love
Dean:-) |
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Re: From Dusk Till Dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by ShadowsCloud on
Tuesday, 26th November 2002 @ 08:15:55 PM AEST (User
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Dean, I am glad that my poem could bring happy thoughts to you. Lately most of my poetry lately has brought tears instead of smiles. But I am really glad that you like this poem. I am hoping that one day I can have this with Shadow.
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Re: From Dusk Till Dawn
(User Rating: 1 ) by OreO on
Wednesday, 27th November 2002 @ 12:43:31 AM AEST (User
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This is beautiful, i can't say
i've been here in this place in person
with anyone but it's a beautiful vision
Thanks for sharing this one
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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