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Array ( [sid] => 75081 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Going to Die [time] => 2004-12-09 18:08:04 [hometext] => old poem once again to go with a picture I drew of a chained down angel, enjoy! [bodytext] => Through the beautiful skies, I use to pass over the clouds and soar,
But now I am chained down, and I can't do it anymore,
I use to be so free, I didn't have a care,
Now I'll never feel the wind again, blowing through my hair,
I've tried so many times, to up and fly away,
But these chains keep their hold and will never give way,
So now all I can do is sit here, wait for death to come,
My life seems so short, it seems like it has barely just begun,
Can anybody see me? Why don't you try and help?
Im begging and Im pleading, for these chains to melt,
I guess no one can hear me, they can't hear my mournful cry,
Im just another angel, an angel who's going to die. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 13 [informant] => XxNights_ChildxX [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Going to Die

Contributed by XxNights_ChildxX on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:08:04 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Through the beautiful skies, I use to pass over the clouds and soar,
But now I am chained down, and I can't do it anymore,
I use to be so free, I didn't have a care,
Now I'll never feel the wind again, blowing through my hair,
I've tried so many times, to up and fly away,
But these chains keep their hold and will never give way,
So now all I can do is sit here, wait for death to come,
My life seems so short, it seems like it has barely just begun,
Can anybody see me? Why don't you try and help?
Im begging and Im pleading, for these chains to melt,
I guess no one can hear me, they can't hear my mournful cry,
Im just another angel, an angel who's going to die.

Copyright © XxNights_ChildxX ... [ 2004-12-09 18:08:04]
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Re: Going to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by DesolantDreamer on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:57:21 PM AEST
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Very spiritual...this is a very good poem...good job!
-Tsubaki

Re: Going to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by CAUGHTinAdream on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 08:22:14 PM AEST
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beautiful. I relate to it very much. Keep it up

Re: Going to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:01:20 PM AEST
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excellent write. reminds me of system of a down.

Re: Going to Die (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 10:07:06 PM AEST
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good poem i feel that way but im no angel

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