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Array ( [sid] => 75052 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => POZITIVE LIVING A CHAT ROOM ON A.O.L [time] => 2004-12-09 14:17:03 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You ticked me off.
Now your going to pay.
My word's cut deep.
Now your going to bleed.

Your going to wish you never
met me.
I'm the nightmare within
your dream.

Cut me off for saying what's
within me.
Telling me I have to conform
to your ways.

I'm no puppet.
I'm no toy.

I'm a person,
I'm a individual.

With feelings,
With a heart,
With a voice.

Tell me I can't tell you how I
deal with having AIDS.

Everyone's different,
No one's the same.

Some drink,
Some take drugs,
Some just deal with it,
Some are just so depress
they just want to die.

Me, I like to bleed,
I like to cut my flesh,
Watch the blood flow,
Let the AIDS bleed out
of me.

You ticked me off.
And, My pen is mighty.

I GOT A VOICE
MOTHER ****.

I'll put your name in lights.
(That's one of my favorite saying)
Cause I'll do it,
It's no threat,
It's a promise.

I'm not passing judgment
you've already done that
to me.
Tried and convective me.
For me telling you how I deal
with having AIDS.

Pozitive living a chat room
on a.o.l .
Don't tell me,
I'm telling you.

You need to grow the * up.

Everyone with AIDS deals with
it differently.
But you sat I'm not allowed to say
the way I deal with it.
Others deal with it this way to.
So what is up with you.

Tick me off again,
And, I'll even be worst
with my pen.

I'll get you removed,
Watch me my friend.

(You keep your friends close,
You keep your enemy closer,
That's why I call you my friend)

DO IT AGAIN,
PLEASE PLEASE,
DO IT AGAIN.

I guarantee you won't make it
through the fire I create.
I'm your worst dream,
And, There's more than just
me who feel this way.

I just got enough ***** to
write it down and tell you
what I think.

I ain't afraid of you,
I ain't afraid of what anyone
thinks.

But you ticked me off,
And, My words cut deep,
I hope they make you think.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN
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POZITIVE LIVING A CHAT ROOM ON A.O.L

Contributed by lemmen on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:17:03 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

You ticked me off.
Now your going to pay.
My word's cut deep.
Now your going to bleed.

Your going to wish you never
met me.
I'm the nightmare within
your dream.

Cut me off for saying what's
within me.
Telling me I have to conform
to your ways.

I'm no puppet.
I'm no toy.

I'm a person,
I'm a individual.

With feelings,
With a heart,
With a voice.

Tell me I can't tell you how I
deal with having AIDS.

Everyone's different,
No one's the same.

Some drink,
Some take drugs,
Some just deal with it,
Some are just so depress
they just want to die.

Me, I like to bleed,
I like to cut my flesh,
Watch the blood flow,
Let the AIDS bleed out
of me.

You ticked me off.
And, My pen is mighty.

I GOT A VOICE
MOTHER ****.

I'll put your name in lights.
(That's one of my favorite saying)
Cause I'll do it,
It's no threat,
It's a promise.

I'm not passing judgment
you've already done that
to me.
Tried and convective me.
For me telling you how I deal
with having AIDS.

Pozitive living a chat room
on a.o.l .
Don't tell me,
I'm telling you.

You need to grow the * up.

Everyone with AIDS deals with
it differently.
But you sat I'm not allowed to say
the way I deal with it.
Others deal with it this way to.
So what is up with you.

Tick me off again,
And, I'll even be worst
with my pen.

I'll get you removed,
Watch me my friend.

(You keep your friends close,
You keep your enemy closer,
That's why I call you my friend)

DO IT AGAIN,
PLEASE PLEASE,
DO IT AGAIN.

I guarantee you won't make it
through the fire I create.
I'm your worst dream,
And, There's more than just
me who feel this way.

I just got enough ***** to
write it down and tell you
what I think.

I ain't afraid of you,
I ain't afraid of what anyone
thinks.

But you ticked me off,
And, My words cut deep,
I hope they make you think.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-12-09 14:17:03]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: POZITIVE LIVING A CHAT ROOM ON A.O.L (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:28:52 PM AEST
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I got in trouble in a chat room for using the word vodka.. because it was an AA chat room.. LOL.. ummm..are they afraid of a word?? good poem.. on the other side, they got me some $$ back when someone fraudulantly used my bankcard to buy stuff.. so they have their good points.

Re: POZITIVE LIVING A CHAT ROOM ON A.O.L (User Rating: 1 )
by witch_derna on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 06:11:40 AM AEST
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You ticked me off.
Now your going to pay.........

Are you going to call the NSA????? LOL.

Good write honey.
Love Fluffy

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