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Array ( [sid] => 75008 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frustration [time] => 2004-12-09 05:55:25 [hometext] => Fourth verse doesn't really fit in, I know this..but I refuse to remove it! It kind of popped into my thoughts while I was already thinking..a thought upon a thought, so I made it stay. [bodytext] => I've always known I'm unhappy
But I've never known why
I always feel so helpless
So I just burst out and cry

Weakness inside me
Cold blood within my veins
Any sign of energy
Gets thrown up in flames

I can no longer hold these feelings
Can't bottle them up inside
With these tiny explosions
That are impossible to hide

I want to return to the world
Lay my troubles upon someone else
I'll live a second life
And watch them go through hell

Written in red ink
Like blood pouring from my hand
A tiny pinhole punctured in my skin
Lets itself expand

It opens up my mind
To see my thoughts stained
With images that burn like acid
Driving me insane.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 48 [informant] => Embracing_Darkness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Frustration

Contributed by Embracing_Darkness on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 05:55:25 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

I've always known I'm unhappy
But I've never known why
I always feel so helpless
So I just burst out and cry

Weakness inside me
Cold blood within my veins
Any sign of energy
Gets thrown up in flames

I can no longer hold these feelings
Can't bottle them up inside
With these tiny explosions
That are impossible to hide

I want to return to the world
Lay my troubles upon someone else
I'll live a second life
And watch them go through hell

Written in red ink
Like blood pouring from my hand
A tiny pinhole punctured in my skin
Lets itself expand

It opens up my mind
To see my thoughts stained
With images that burn like acid
Driving me insane..

Copyright © Embracing_Darkness ... [ 2004-12-09 05:55:25]
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Re: Frustration (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 06:02:06 AM AEST
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expressive and very well written,

pixie xx

Re: Frustration (User Rating: 1 )
by Remi on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 10:32:11 AM AEST
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I thought everything fits just fine and i have always wrtten poems well one line or one verse dosen't sem like it fit but it does so don't change anything about this writn ok

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