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Array ( [sid] => 74997 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My hopeless Broken family [time] => 2004-12-09 02:25:23 [hometext] => just started thinkin bout my broken fam after readin what savedbydeath wrote girl ur so not alone [bodytext] => When I was young things happened
Things I was to young to know about
Things between my dad and my step sister
Then my parents split
I'd always fight with my mom and younger sister
Then I was told he did the same with her
I was about to flip
I was left out when they all talked about it
I left and started walking
I calmed down and came home
My mom and step sister became drunks
Guys coming and going
There was nothing I could do
My mom started with drugs
And I got out to live with my dad
I know what he did was bad
But I forgive him
He's always there for me
Always helping out the best he can
He owns two houses and four cars
My mom don't have a car and lives in a basement
My dad did wrong but he's doing good now
Being there for me and my sister
When my mom kicked use out on the streets
I love you dad [comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 43 [informant] => stonedraider23 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
My hopeless Broken family

Contributed by stonedraider23 on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 02:25:23 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



When I was young things happened
Things I was to young to know about
Things between my dad and my step sister
Then my parents split
I'd always fight with my mom and younger sister
Then I was told he did the same with her
I was about to flip
I was left out when they all talked about it
I left and started walking
I calmed down and came home
My mom and step sister became drunks
Guys coming and going
There was nothing I could do
My mom started with drugs
And I got out to live with my dad
I know what he did was bad
But I forgive him
He's always there for me
Always helping out the best he can
He owns two houses and four cars
My mom don't have a car and lives in a basement
My dad did wrong but he's doing good now
Being there for me and my sister
When my mom kicked use out on the streets
I love you dad




Copyright © stonedraider23 ... [ 2004-12-09 02:25:23]
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Re: My hopeless Broken family (User Rating: 1 )
by iodinelove on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 03:37:16 AM AEST
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how do i react to this? I dunno......it's ok....i just don't know how to react....me and emotion.....we're not real close ^_^
um....all families are hopeless.....not always broken but.....well.....my parents are insane....completly and utterly....
they make me want to throw myself out of a window...but anyway...nice stuff...keep it up


Re: My hopeless Broken family (User Rating: 1 )
by DamentedSuicide on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:24:16 AM AEST
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hey know how you feel. my parents split my dads a druggy and my mom just doesnt care.
Im just glad im an only child, But just remember keep strong and nothing can over power you

***Hugs***
~~~Raven~~~




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