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[sid] => 74996
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => A Turning Point
[time] => 2004-12-09 02:20:03
[hometext] => umm...i don't really know what to say about this poem....the heading says it all...Pleaz write comments!...I really want to improve :)
[bodytext] => I want you here With me, by my side I would not fear Of losing my pride For I would be strong Strong as an ox And be able to sing As now, I am free from my box For once I was trapped Wanting to hide Feelings and emotions Bottled up inside I did not want love I did not want pain So what did I want? Was I insane? For it was me who was so distressed Why could I not perform to my best? No longer could I bare The thought of me not to care So there I was Seeking for help Would anyone understand Why my life was so damned At last I found someone But why were they so hard to find? For they were there with me Every step, so close behind It was due to my weakness That I could see less For this I am sad For I did not see sooner What I was turning into was bad Some kind of luna Tic! goes the clock I realise my fate I have to change quick Before it's too late [comments] => 3 [counter] => 233 [topic] => 65 [informant] => vanessamay [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )
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