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Array ( [sid] => 74944 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Keeping my sanity [time] => 2004-12-08 19:28:30 [hometext] => Im just so sad and confused lately...but dont get the wrong idea about this poem, im not really insane lol.. [bodytext] => Desperately diving into the depths of your soul
Silently screaming for God to make me whole.
Pondering the echos of your voice in my head
Simply praying for a safe place to be led.
Wonderous moments I hold in my heart
Yet shaking, for I seem to be falling apart.
Suddenly sinking and I don't know why
I realized I have been living a lie.
Over me the devil cast his spell
Where right into your arms I fell.
I break free of these chains just in time
Retrieving the sanity that rightfully is mine.
Each day I improve more and more
I refuse to lose my faith; its what I live for. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 182 [topic] => 61 [informant] => caughtinadream [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Keeping my sanity

Contributed by caughtinadream on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:28:30 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Desperately diving into the depths of your soul
Silently screaming for God to make me whole.
Pondering the echos of your voice in my head
Simply praying for a safe place to be led.
Wonderous moments I hold in my heart
Yet shaking, for I seem to be falling apart.
Suddenly sinking and I don't know why
I realized I have been living a lie.
Over me the devil cast his spell
Where right into your arms I fell.
I break free of these chains just in time
Retrieving the sanity that rightfully is mine.
Each day I improve more and more
I refuse to lose my faith; its what I live for.

Copyright © caughtinadream ... [ 2004-12-08 19:28:30]
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Re: Keeping my sanity (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:33:16 PM AEST
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great write..well expressed keep it up

Re: Keeping my sanity (User Rating: 1 )
by waos on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:44:06 PM AEST
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not bad; i like the hopefullness at the end of it. i thought you did a good job of portraying the path that people can go on. good work.

Re: Keeping my sanity (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:43:05 PM AEST
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amazing write. i loved it. keep it up. =]

Re: Keeping my sanity (User Rating: 1 )
by EVERxSOxSWEET on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 07:57:02 PM AEST
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oh kristen..you insane little devil child..what am i going to do with you..haha JUST KIDDING..your sane and i love you :o)

Great write too..you never fail to amaze me ..and make me completely jealous :-p
I`d tell you to keep it up..but i already know you will :)

-- Kaylee

Re: Keeping my sanity (User Rating: 1 )
by LEMMEN on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 08:21:44 PM AEST
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Very well written Keeping your sanity.

~DENNIS~

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