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Array ( [sid] => 74932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Cold [time] => 2004-12-08 18:25:41 [hometext] => This too was written by a friend and altered by myself...yes I had permission. [bodytext] => The cold and bitterness of the human spirit is killing the world. Men pollute the world with their weapons of war; they destroy the environment leaving people and animals homeless.
Life is cold, bitter and sick.
I'm losing my sense of touch, my sense of smell and my sense of reality. As the world turns bitter and cold, my body is growing ever so numb and my mind is freezing up. The seasons change every year, growing more cold and bitter. I see people entering into a cold war within themselves.
The world has lost the true meaning of love and kindness. It is turning hateful, cold and bitter. People are giving in to the coldness that surrounds them. Their hearts are dying.
When will the coldness go away?
When will I feel warm again?
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Cold

Contributed by DesolantDreamer on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:25:41 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

The cold and bitterness of the human spirit is killing the world. Men pollute the world with their weapons of war; they destroy the environment leaving people and animals homeless.
Life is cold, bitter and sick.
I'm losing my sense of touch, my sense of smell and my sense of reality. As the world turns bitter and cold, my body is growing ever so numb and my mind is freezing up. The seasons change every year, growing more cold and bitter. I see people entering into a cold war within themselves.
The world has lost the true meaning of love and kindness. It is turning hateful, cold and bitter. People are giving in to the coldness that surrounds them. Their hearts are dying.
When will the coldness go away?
When will I feel warm again?

Copyright © DesolantDreamer ... [ 2004-12-08 18:25:41]
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Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Sirena_Degana on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:43:05 PM AEST
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i wrote one like this called human races disgrace..but urs is so much flipping better!!!!or ur friends...hmm...totally awesome!

Re: Cold (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Saturday, 26th February 2005 @ 10:53:56 PM AEST
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i think this needs a tad bit more work to reach its highest potential.

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