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Array ( [sid] => 74914 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hell [time] => 2004-12-08 16:01:40 [hometext] => This poem sums up my life... Living in the shrouded mists of darkness in my life I have been able to apreciate opinions and relate to them more often... E-mail me your thoughts on this poem thanks!! scotthansen8@hotmail.com [bodytext] => Only two words that can adequately describe this for me
MY LIFE!
I wish I could escape this living Hell, only for a moment I wish
Only it is constant, forcefully pushing me through my life
Why must I go through this? Ohh I now realize why
My undying love that burns within me for you!
You helped me into this world of hurt, so I beg of you
Help me out, drag me out! Somehow show compassion upon me!
Only you watch and push me down farther into the hole until you can no longer see me
Only I can see you, I dream of you every waking moment
Every moment I posses is for you and entirely dedicated to you
I see you when you fall, and I wish I could help you up and take your pain away!
I see you when you are happy,
Only it tears me up inside because it is with another
I wish that I could be the one for you!
Only I don’t posses what you need and want!
What do you want! Tell me and I will find it, I will go anywhere in search of this
I live for you, I would die for you!
Seeing you sad tears my heart into ribbons,
I beg of you always be happy, laugh for those who can’t and cry for those who can’t feel the love that I hold for you. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 179 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Mallard8 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Hell

Contributed by Mallard8 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 04:01:40 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles



Only two words that can adequately describe this for me
MY LIFE!
I wish I could escape this living Hell, only for a moment I wish
Only it is constant, forcefully pushing me through my life
Why must I go through this? Ohh I now realize why
My undying love that burns within me for you!
You helped me into this world of hurt, so I beg of you
Help me out, drag me out! Somehow show compassion upon me!
Only you watch and push me down farther into the hole until you can no longer see me
Only I can see you, I dream of you every waking moment
Every moment I posses is for you and entirely dedicated to you
I see you when you fall, and I wish I could help you up and take your pain away!
I see you when you are happy,
Only it tears me up inside because it is with another
I wish that I could be the one for you!
Only I don’t posses what you need and want!
What do you want! Tell me and I will find it, I will go anywhere in search of this
I live for you, I would die for you!
Seeing you sad tears my heart into ribbons,
I beg of you always be happy, laugh for those who can’t and cry for those who can’t feel the love that I hold for you.




Copyright © Mallard8 ... [ 2004-12-08 16:01:40]
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Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Greg_Skellington on Friday, 25th February 2005 @ 02:37:59 PM AEST
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its scary how this realates so much to my life too...it was good, no great

greg


Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Atari on Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 09:10:14 PM AEST
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Wow, it's so amazing. I can't believe how much i felt your pain when i read this. It's wonderful that you know how well to express yourself! I hope no one has to go through that! I'm sorry that you did already!
wonderful write! Keep it up!


Re: Hell (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Thursday, 29th December 2005 @ 09:07:04 PM AEST
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nice poem




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