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Array ( [sid] => 74889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A strange morning's poem [time] => 2004-12-08 13:18:42 [hometext] => This one is wierd but it's very interesting [bodytext] => sleeping soundly,
I drank through my skull this morning,
a young trampled buck.
Over my eyes I could only see black,
and my ears felt like rumbles.

I sat up a staired out the window,
into the cold, street rising.
People flipping dollar coins into the air,
landing in sewer and homeless buckets.

I saw a man trembling,
fumbling for change,
spitting on the ground, handcuffed.
A maniacal laugh, a crimson scream.

I woke the neighbor.
"Shut up!" she says
"Stop yapping your wank!
I'm trying to get drunk here!"

I spat on the floor with a distained fragrance,
and I opened with window,
to fall through. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 43 [informant] => zenmind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

A strange morning's poem

Contributed by zenmind on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:18:42 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

sleeping soundly,
I drank through my skull this morning,
a young trampled buck.
Over my eyes I could only see black,
and my ears felt like rumbles.

I sat up a staired out the window,
into the cold, street rising.
People flipping dollar coins into the air,
landing in sewer and homeless buckets.

I saw a man trembling,
fumbling for change,
spitting on the ground, handcuffed.
A maniacal laugh, a crimson scream.

I woke the neighbor.
"Shut up!" she says
"Stop yapping your wank!
I'm trying to get drunk here!"

I spat on the floor with a distained fragrance,
and I opened with window,
to fall through.

Copyright © zenmind ... [ 2004-12-08 13:18:42]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A strange morning's poem (User Rating: 1 )
by In2thetwilightzone on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:22:46 PM AEST
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yes i agree with you!!!!!!! xxxxxxxxxxxxxx

Re: A strange morning's poem (User Rating: 1 )
by DarkInTheWater on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:55:43 PM AEST
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It was good, very good, but quite hard to understand...

Re: A strange morning's poem (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:50:25 PM AEST
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INCREDIBLE!!! These words you wove so effortlessly have struck me silent, Zenmind... All that flows through my mind is: Perfect. More words when they form and are suitable to submit! Loved it!!!! Forever,

Your friend,

Fleur de bonheur. *Stephy*

Re: A strange morning's poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Ina on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 12:22:48 AM AEST
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Yo babe this was the best poem I have read by you so far. I will probably say that a dozen times more as I read more of your poetry, but take that as a super duper compliment. YEs? I love how you analyze my poetry, and tie things together, and tell ME what I was probably writing. It's so great. You are inflating my ego, my friend...its t h i s big now.

got your messagw ill respond when I am not being haunted by the psychology book on my lap and the final tomorrow at 11 am. Brrr.

...to
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hmmm, thats the image i got, not of a falling cray sarcastic boy (geez you are a boy right?)
but of words, falling letters.

night.

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