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Array ( [sid] => 74863 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Black Christmas [time] => 2004-12-08 05:15:13 [hometext] => What can I say? [bodytext] => As Christmas time comes
The world really hums
Most peole are jolly and bright
But deep in my heart
I am being torn apart
In darkness and can't see the light

It's to do with a girl
Who took over my world
Who I love more than words can explain
But it's easy to see
That she doesn't love me
And it's causing me oh so much pain

She's tried to be nice
Give me friendly advice
She's told me that she's not in love
But my heart is hell-bent
Because she's heaven sent
Like an angel beamed down from above

We'll still be friends
But my further hopes end
My future has hit a stone wall
As others pass by
I just don't bat an eye
On her I have gambled it all [comments] => 4 [counter] => 278 [topic] => 48 [informant] => pander [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Black Christmas

Contributed by pander on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:15:13 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

As Christmas time comes
The world really hums
Most peole are jolly and bright
But deep in my heart
I am being torn apart
In darkness and can't see the light

It's to do with a girl
Who took over my world
Who I love more than words can explain
But it's easy to see
That she doesn't love me
And it's causing me oh so much pain

She's tried to be nice
Give me friendly advice
She's told me that she's not in love
But my heart is hell-bent
Because she's heaven sent
Like an angel beamed down from above

We'll still be friends
But my further hopes end
My future has hit a stone wall
As others pass by
I just don't bat an eye
On her I have gambled it all

Copyright © pander ... [ 2004-12-08 05:15:13]
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Re: Black Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:55:20 AM AEST
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very emotional and moving write, it is a real shame that she doesn't love you in the saem way you lopve her, I hope this doesn't bring you too much heartache in the future

takecare

very well written btw
pixie xx

Re: Black Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:22:47 AM AEST
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BRAVO!!! ( stands and applauds)
This a great write my friend. The R&R made it, even though it's a sad, a fun read.

Very well written
Barkeep!!
Larry

Re: Black Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:39:01 AM AEST
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Sad and cute at the same time.
Stitch

Re: Black Christmas (User Rating: 1 )
by xrockstheheart on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:17:01 AM AEST
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its better to have loved and lost, than never to have loved at all ---

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