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then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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A beautiful day with my love......

Contributed by ravisada on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:07:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

When the sun rise in the morning
then you shine like a brighten lady
When the moon set in the evening
then you look like a beautiful lady
When I go to bed in the night
then you twinkle like stars
When the cool breeze touches me
then I take care of your love
When you are under my arms
then I tell you how much I love you
When I say my night prayers
then I thank God for giving you to me
When I close my eyes to sleep
then you rest your head on my chest
and listen to my heart beat says you are mine.

Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka

Copyright @2004 Ravi Sathasivam

Copyright © ravisada ... [ 2004-12-08 03:07:29]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: A beautiful day with my love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:29:58 AM AEST
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A beautifull write.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: A beautiful day with my love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 11:11:31 AM AEST
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It's good that you expressed in this poem how much in love you are. Good work!

-Butch

Re: A beautiful day with my love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Sunday, 3rd April 2005 @ 08:22:01 PM AEST
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Wow, I loved it, loved it, loved it! Beautiful.

Re: A beautiful day with my love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 7th August 2005 @ 01:51:52 AM AEST
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It's beautiful to see such love swirling around the pages of this website...

Re: A beautiful day with my love...... (User Rating: 1 )
by Inverted on Tuesday, 21st November 2006 @ 01:29:42 PM AEST
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i really like it, good write, youve captured what being in love with someone is really like

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