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On my computer I typed
Turned around and looked at you
But you were caught up in the tv
How come you don't pay even a little attention to me
A few words would break the silence
And bring you back to reality
But I don't want to be the one
Who always has to make small talk
So I just go back to what I have been doing all along
Lost in the computer wishing I could stay
Maybe that would make you care
But I know there is no hope
So I won't even try
Back to my computer
Where I tell you goodbye [comments] => 7 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unlovedchild [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

No Attention From You

Contributed by unlovedchild on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:25:08 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

As I sat there sitting lonely
On my computer I typed
Turned around and looked at you
But you were caught up in the tv
How come you don't pay even a little attention to me
A few words would break the silence
And bring you back to reality
But I don't want to be the one
Who always has to make small talk
So I just go back to what I have been doing all along
Lost in the computer wishing I could stay
Maybe that would make you care
But I know there is no hope
So I won't even try
Back to my computer
Where I tell you goodbye

Copyright © unlovedchild ... [ 2004-12-08 01:25:08]
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Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:36:35 AM AEST
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Wow girl, this is very good!!! I can totally relate! Good write!!!! Very emotional...

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:37:15 AM AEST
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this is a really sad write i know how it feels

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:39:19 AM AEST
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omg i love it, awesome

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:19:35 AM AEST
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I can relate totally to this poem, my ex did not pay attention to me and i stayed buried in the computer all the time.

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:15:14 AM AEST
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Amy your poems are really starting to worry me, well if you need to talk youll know where to find me and this time i promise you that ill have more time for you ok.

P.S. I like your poem, very emotional.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:02:33 AM AEST
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it feels awful to be ignored by a loved one, makes you feel like you might aswell not exist, this write was very sad,

pixie xx

Re: No Attention From You (User Rating: 1 )
by Pyrofungus on Thursday, 23rd December 2004 @ 07:53:54 PM AEST
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Very nice...I liked this one alot...attention and affection are something that we all need...i wrote one about the lack of affection if you want to check it out you can...

nice write
summer

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