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I feel more alone than ever
A time in my life
wher I am finally
a part of a circle of life
and yet I feel
Sad
Alone
and
cold inside.
If a body has ever been born empty
like a cage without a bird,
that would be me.
As time and age become covered in dust
and my life begins to form,
to take some sort of shape,
the cage slowly becomes occupied
by my half-life
however,
this cage still stands alone. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Nardo [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

32

Contributed by Nardo on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:45:30 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Its my Birthday today
I feel more alone than ever
A time in my life
wher I am finally
a part of a circle of life
and yet I feel
Sad
Alone
and
cold inside.
If a body has ever been born empty
like a cage without a bird,
that would be me.
As time and age become covered in dust
and my life begins to form,
to take some sort of shape,
the cage slowly becomes occupied
by my half-life
however,
this cage still stands alone.

Copyright © Nardo ... [ 2004-12-08 00:45:30]
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Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenn2004 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:52:35 AM AEST
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I hope u have a Happy Birthday!!

Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:05:16 AM AEST
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Trust time, trust fate, trust yourself - and believe that this time next year... things will be better. Better than just 'better' - good.
I like this... and yet, I wish for you a different sort of write on your next birthday.

You have a whole new year in front of you. Enjoy it! Happy Birthday!
~SNM~

Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:59:14 AM AEST
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Happy, Happy birthday.
Sorry u feel so alone.
luv, huggs,
emy
Great writing.

Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:55:53 AM AEST
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Happy Birthday to you.

I liked this poem. I think we might be twins.Today is my birthday and I am also 32. Don't worry, things will get better for you. Just keep your head held high and try not to let things bother you. *S* Cynthia

Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:03:26 AM AEST
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HAPPY BIRTHDAY

Dont feel alone, we are all here for you *hugs*
pixie xx

a very sad write, well written,

Re: 32 (User Rating: 1 )
by Red_October on Tuesday, 14th December 2004 @ 02:37:30 PM AEST
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Boo. Sorry to hear this was your birthday felt alone and stuck in half-life mode. Hope it's gotten better in the days since. Tiffany J. (Red_October)

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