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Array ( [sid] => 74848 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => How Our Friendship Is [time] => 2004-12-08 00:28:17 [hometext] => this is a poem i wrote for my friend pawprintsjen [bodytext] => You have everything that is essential in a person to be loved
Eyes kinder and more beautiful than the sky above
A smile that brightens up the world
In every way you are you are just an amazing girl
You are really a brilliant person you are wiser beyond your years
You have so much to hope for in life but you still have so many fears
And doubts of what the future holds but I am sure you will be fine
You have your self to fall back and my self too till the ends of time
You have no idea how great you are and how much you mean to me
I tell you so but you still don’t understand just how great you will always be
You do so much for me like putting up with my messed up moods
You know that I could never make you feel broken torn apart or used
I cherish you too much to ever do a thing like that to you
I know you hate promises like that but just think of it as something new
Something more something better something different but still the same
I hope that you know that what I feel for you is more than just a silly game
You a dear friend to me and always will be that is just how it is
I care about you a lot and I never think of you as just a kid
I don’t know how much I am worth to you but you mean more than anything
Having you in my life is important to me if you could look into my eyes you would see everything
My eyes would reveal everything to you if you wanted them to
If you would ask me to I would do
Anything in my power for you if you would just ask
Nothing for you would be too great a task
That is just how our friendship is
And it I think there is nothing better than this
Not even an angel’s kiss
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How Our Friendship Is

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 12:28:17 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



You have everything that is essential in a person to be loved
Eyes kinder and more beautiful than the sky above
A smile that brightens up the world
In every way you are you are just an amazing girl
You are really a brilliant person you are wiser beyond your years
You have so much to hope for in life but you still have so many fears
And doubts of what the future holds but I am sure you will be fine
You have your self to fall back and my self too till the ends of time
You have no idea how great you are and how much you mean to me
I tell you so but you still don’t understand just how great you will always be
You do so much for me like putting up with my messed up moods
You know that I could never make you feel broken torn apart or used
I cherish you too much to ever do a thing like that to you
I know you hate promises like that but just think of it as something new
Something more something better something different but still the same
I hope that you know that what I feel for you is more than just a silly game
You a dear friend to me and always will be that is just how it is
I care about you a lot and I never think of you as just a kid
I don’t know how much I am worth to you but you mean more than anything
Having you in my life is important to me if you could look into my eyes you would see everything
My eyes would reveal everything to you if you wanted them to
If you would ask me to I would do
Anything in my power for you if you would just ask
Nothing for you would be too great a task
That is just how our friendship is
And it I think there is nothing better than this
Not even an angel’s kiss




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Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:11:21 AM AEST
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Very good writing.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy


Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by little_genna on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 04:01:17 AM AEST
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This is so sweet and heartfelt,
She is lucky to have someone like you john.
Good write babe,

Love
Stace xx


Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:10:17 AM AEST
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deep and expressed well,

pixie xx


Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by autumngreeneyes on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 10:19:41 AM AEST
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Something more something better something different but still the same

I like that.. yes: I like that..


Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by Xion_alXar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:33:13 PM AEST
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That was great...not many things touch me emotionally but this did. I didn't read all of yours but I read a few after this and they're all great.


Re: How Our Friendship Is (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:22:42 PM AEST
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=]] another excellent write. i liked that first line with essential. it made me laugh, especially after you put my AIM name on there! well even though you dont like this poem, i do... there is nothing in here that cant be disliked.




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