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Array ( [sid] => 74838 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Star Light Baby [time] => 2004-12-07 22:47:36 [hometext] => A short one about my baby AJ. Comments always welcome and appreciated. [bodytext] => blue eyed baby like the sky,
smiles so sweet make me high

forever love is what I've found
life is better with you around

precious moments I sacredly hold
ours, a story, yet to be told

floating in a fairy tale dream
this is a reality I have never seen

thank you baby for being you
I love every little thing you do

completed, yes, now we are
you are my shining star

when I lose the will to live
your eyes to me strength give

a tiny being, yet so powerful
even a gigle makes me emotional

I cherish you AJ, for you are mine
and I will love you until the end of time.
[comments] => 9 [counter] => 229 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Rxqueen [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Star Light Baby

Contributed by Rxqueen on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:47:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

blue eyed baby like the sky,
smiles so sweet make me high

forever love is what I've found
life is better with you around

precious moments I sacredly hold
ours, a story, yet to be told

floating in a fairy tale dream
this is a reality I have never seen

thank you baby for being you
I love every little thing you do

completed, yes, now we are
you are my shining star

when I lose the will to live
your eyes to me strength give

a tiny being, yet so powerful
even a gigle makes me emotional

I cherish you AJ, for you are mine
and I will love you until the end of time.

Copyright © Rxqueen ... [ 2004-12-07 22:47:36]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by UnlovedChild on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 01:32:20 AM AEST
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Aww sweet one. This is a great poem. Full of emotion. I hope AJ will see this when he is older because this is a poem you both should share. I also hope that he will appreciate you and be thankful to have such a sweet, caring, and loving mother as you are. Any one would be lucky to have a mother like you. Keep up your writing, you have an amazing ability to create such heartfelt poems. Nice write, love ya!

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 02:44:57 AM AEST
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This is so beautifull.
My children are grown but they still give me a reason, also the grandkids.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy
A masterpeice to any mother.

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 03:24:30 AM AEST
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Oh Jocelyn this is so sweet, very imotional and caring for AJ. I love this it made me teary at the end.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by AliB on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 05:23:55 AM AEST
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Awww how sweet,

I love babies, shame they have to grow up really. This was a lovely heartfelt poem, loved it.

Ali xx

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 06:12:14 AM AEST
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awww that was so lovely, made me smile while reading :) *jhugs*

pixie xx

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:29:54 AM AEST
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Nothing is more precious and amazing than the love between mother and child -
Thanks for writing.

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 07:06:47 PM AEST
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aww what a sweet poem I loved it... nothing
more needs to be said.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 06:17:11 PM AEST
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AAWWWWW, it's so cute.

If anyone needs me I'll be throwing up.

Hey, great job on this.

Re: Star Light Baby (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 21st December 2004 @ 05:27:47 AM AEST
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Beautiful-just beautiful
I read the poem threesome
This is so much better
I love your choice of words
In your image-in Gods image
Imagine
The reason for living
A great mother child love poem
Keep up your good writtings
Sinned

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