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Array ( [sid] => 74791 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => depressed [time] => 2004-12-07 16:55:39 [hometext] => [bodytext] => You make me laugh
Thinking that you shoutin,will upset me
You'll be sorry..
When i slit my wrists just to be free
Free from these tears
Free from this pain
Free from all my fears
For every tear that these eyes shed..
Is another slit upon these scared wounded wrists
Forgotten how many times these arms have bled,
Every single slit represents a moment of pain,
A moment of you shouting at me
I cant take all this..i cant..take all this strain
How can one person cry so many tears?
How can one person have so much anger?
How can one person have so many fears?
So tired of getting this jagged,blood stained glass
And hurting myself over and over
Just hope that when im gone,and time does eventually pass
That you will realise,YOU made me do it
You caused the first...
and last slit! [comments] => 2 [counter] => 246 [topic] => 36 [informant] => TornApart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 6 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

depressed

Contributed by TornApart on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:55:39 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

You make me laugh
Thinking that you shoutin,will upset me
You'll be sorry..
When i slit my wrists just to be free
Free from these tears
Free from this pain
Free from all my fears
For every tear that these eyes shed..
Is another slit upon these scared wounded wrists
Forgotten how many times these arms have bled,
Every single slit represents a moment of pain,
A moment of you shouting at me
I cant take all this..i cant..take all this strain
How can one person cry so many tears?
How can one person have so much anger?
How can one person have so many fears?
So tired of getting this jagged,blood stained glass
And hurting myself over and over
Just hope that when im gone,and time does eventually pass
That you will realise,YOU made me do it
You caused the first...
and last slit!

Copyright © TornApart ... [ 2004-12-07 16:55:39]
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Re: depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by pyro_88 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:42:38 PM AEST
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i like this poem. it reminds me of how suicidal i get and how i start thinking. keep em coming.

Re: depressed (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:05:02 PM AEST
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they did not and cannot make you do anything. they might be the cause, but they do not control what you do or do not do. dont hurt yourself or kill yourself over someone that deserves to have their mouth ductaped.

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