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Array ( [sid] => 74766 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Hoaxing Love [time] => 2004-12-07 15:03:27 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I wanted us to live this faery tale life of perfect existence
Where in the screen shot theres only you and me
You池e the lead actor and I知 an extra in the background
Watching you perform your hoaxing love with miss beautiful
I could have been miss beautiful but I ***** up
I forgot the lines in this faery tale so I got thrown out
But you dont care its easy to replace the ugly
I知 already in your past but I cant seem to put you in mine
I知 the forgotten the experiment
I知 the run over animal on the side of the road
Waiting to die please take pity on me
Each tear cried for you was a mistake
Each scar on my wrist as a mistake
Just like you - I never learn from my mistakes
I知 weak and each tear that has been cried could have been for someone better
But I知 not worthy of my tears
So you can take them and keep them - taunt me with them
Sometimes I wish that one day my phone will ring
And it will be you and when it isn稚 I choke back tears
Because in the back of my mind I know you will never ring me
Though I致e deleted you out of my life
But only is technology form
You will never leave my memories
They still haunt me like the thought that I値l see you on the street
I only hope that your next victim will get over you quicker than I did
..I still am.. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kreeping_Beauty [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Hoaxing Love

Contributed by Kreeping_Beauty on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:03:27 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I wanted us to live this faery tale life of perfect existence
Where in the screen shot theres only you and me
You池e the lead actor and I知 an extra in the background
Watching you perform your hoaxing love with miss beautiful
I could have been miss beautiful but I ***** up
I forgot the lines in this faery tale so I got thrown out
But you dont care its easy to replace the ugly
I知 already in your past but I cant seem to put you in mine
I知 the forgotten the experiment
I知 the run over animal on the side of the road
Waiting to die please take pity on me
Each tear cried for you was a mistake
Each scar on my wrist as a mistake
Just like you - I never learn from my mistakes
I知 weak and each tear that has been cried could have been for someone better
But I知 not worthy of my tears
So you can take them and keep them - taunt me with them
Sometimes I wish that one day my phone will ring
And it will be you and when it isn稚 I choke back tears
Because in the back of my mind I know you will never ring me
Though I致e deleted you out of my life
But only is technology form
You will never leave my memories
They still haunt me like the thought that I値l see you on the street
I only hope that your next victim will get over you quicker than I did
..I still am..




Copyright ツゥ Kreeping_Beauty ... [ 2004-12-07 15:03:27]
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Re: Hoaxing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by Deathly_Rose on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:09:14 PM AEST
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wow... very powerful write.
It's true, it's hard to get over an incident like that, I've been through it many times... it's even harder to get over when you thought they cared... I hope that you get better, and no matter how hard you try to forget him, he'll never leave...

*~Alicia~*


Re: Hoaxing Love (User Rating: 1 )
by socialburnin on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:22:35 PM AEST
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excellent poem, moving, made me cry...i offer to u my services to kick this dudes ass...but please remember not all of us r like that




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