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Looking up at the sun as it beams.
The warm water lapping around my feet,
I know that feeling like this makes me complete.

I have longed to feel like this,
Now I have this feeling of sheer & utter bliss,
I never want to leave my side,
Here I sit watching the beautiful & gentle tide.

Is this what paradise feels like I wonder?
In the distance I hear the rumble of thunder,
I stay still watching the clouds move across the sky,
Watch as time slowly drifts by.

I shiver to myself as I think back,
To a time when my world was black,
& I want to cherish this moment in time,
As it is no-ones but only mine.

I never thought I would make it here today,
I thought that happiness was just too far away,
But you have made today possible for me,
As here now I sit with my dreams in the sea. [comments] => 7 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 14 [informant] => pixie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DreamsandWishes )

Sea Of Dreams

Contributed by pixie on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

I stand here wading in the sea of dreams,
Looking up at the sun as it beams.
The warm water lapping around my feet,
I know that feeling like this makes me complete.

I have longed to feel like this,
Now I have this feeling of sheer & utter bliss,
I never want to leave my side,
Here I sit watching the beautiful & gentle tide.

Is this what paradise feels like I wonder?
In the distance I hear the rumble of thunder,
I stay still watching the clouds move across the sky,
Watch as time slowly drifts by.

I shiver to myself as I think back,
To a time when my world was black,
& I want to cherish this moment in time,
As it is no-ones but only mine.

I never thought I would make it here today,
I thought that happiness was just too far away,
But you have made today possible for me,
As here now I sit with my dreams in the sea.

Copyright © pixie ... [ 2004-12-07 09:27:44]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:34:57 AM AEST
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Great write Pixie. You have such and imigination and i can easily lose myself in your poetry. I love your work no matter what mood the poem is it just keeps me wanting more. Lol i think i'm addicted to your poetry =P I can't wait to see more.

~Alucia~

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:11:36 AM AEST
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Aww. This is so cute. And it's really nice to see you happy Krissie. =)
I have to agree though. I can fall into your poems. :D
Great write hun.
*hugs* Phil xxx

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:38:14 AM AEST
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tender and serene very vivid images most lovely Pixie and the time is only yours. I hope you have many many more days of serene bliss just as this poem speaks of.
Hugsssssssss
Michelle

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:46:14 PM AEST
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Lovely write, Pixie...
makes me feel all warm and cozy....
Jenni

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Thursday, 9th December 2004 @ 07:03:56 AM AEST
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i want to say dreamy, so like im just floating away in happy thoughts:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by justjonesy on Friday, 10th December 2004 @ 08:33:35 PM AEST
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i loved this one....amazing imagery....just had a good feeling all the way through

Re: Sea Of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 11:43:20 AM AEST
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A poem that places into my mind the most perfect paradise I could ever imagine. Each stanza flows from one to the next perfectly.
I can see u've made alot of progress in your life since you first started writing and am truly estatic for you now that you're happy.
A very inspiring poem.I hope one day I can pull through my troubles and feel this great sensation you describe you are feeling now. Well done.
Keep writing :)

Lots of love
xx_lil_devilish_angel_xx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

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