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Array ( [sid] => 74726 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => All because of you [time] => 2004-12-07 09:20:43 [hometext] => i wasn't to happy when i wrote this... that's y i put it as angry poetry... comments r appreciated [bodytext] => hear my screams
hear my cries
listen to me now
as I slowly die
I'm watching you
as you watch me
look at me now
at what you've done to me
the pain you've caused me
is way to much
so I decided to end my life
one single cut
it will all be over
feel bad now?
or has your heart grown colder
you did this to me
no one else
you're the reason I cut myself
this pain is nothing
to the pain you've already caused me
I just wish you knew
this is all cause of you
you're the reason
I'm ending my life [comments] => 4 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 6 [informant] => jishes_4_ever [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

All because of you

Contributed by jishes_4_ever on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:20:43 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

hear my screams
hear my cries
listen to me now
as I slowly die
I'm watching you
as you watch me
look at me now
at what you've done to me
the pain you've caused me
is way to much
so I decided to end my life
one single cut
it will all be over
feel bad now?
or has your heart grown colder
you did this to me
no one else
you're the reason I cut myself
this pain is nothing
to the pain you've already caused me
I just wish you knew
this is all cause of you
you're the reason
I'm ending my life

Copyright © jishes_4_ever ... [ 2004-12-07 09:20:43]
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Re: All because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by BlindSuicide on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:29:23 AM AEST
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Very deep poetry but take it from sumbody that has a lot of experience.. suicide is never the the answer.. its the porblem.

~Alucia~

Re: All because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:34:13 AM AEST
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a very pained write, filled with anger, hope it felt better to get it out of your system *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: All because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by daydreamer22 on Wednesday, 8th December 2004 @ 08:07:54 PM AEST
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hey grlie..who were you so mad at..i think i know but im not sure...gah why so angry...haha good poem...lylasa
tty 2moro...

Awaiting your next...
~*ME*~

Re: All because of you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 12:52:47 AM AEST
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Hey, I can relate,
Don't let that someone control your life, and don't let them Ruin it either, just say Screw you, I don't give a flip about you ! lol well thats what I would say, well Good Luck, Great and powerful write

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