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Array ( [sid] => 74713 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Arianah [time] => 2004-12-07 04:13:28 [hometext] => Written about my kind of alter ego..imaginary friend..whatever you would like to call her. I wasn't too sure what to put the topic as though.. [bodytext] => She stands on the beach
The breeze blows back her skirt
See a face full of beauty
But a face full of hurt

She stands there 'til nightfall
When it's her time to rise
And walks along her beaches
With such peace in her eyes

She stands on her own
No one sees her at all
She'll stay in the shadows
'Til she hears the sea call

She stands in the ocean
The water stings her fresh cuts
The pain makes her laugh
As the sea swallows her up

She's trying to breathe
She throws up her hand
But still no one sees her
So she loses sight of the land

Her body is under
Her burdens on top
Her footsteps have been washed away
Any sign of her has been lost..

She stands on the beach
No one sees her but me
Just a vision from my soul
Just who I want to be..
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 189 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Embracing_Darkness [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Arianah

Contributed by Embracing_Darkness on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:13:28 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

She stands on the beach
The breeze blows back her skirt
See a face full of beauty
But a face full of hurt

She stands there 'til nightfall
When it's her time to rise
And walks along her beaches
With such peace in her eyes

She stands on her own
No one sees her at all
She'll stay in the shadows
'Til she hears the sea call

She stands in the ocean
The water stings her fresh cuts
The pain makes her laugh
As the sea swallows her up

She's trying to breathe
She throws up her hand
But still no one sees her
So she loses sight of the land

Her body is under
Her burdens on top
Her footsteps have been washed away
Any sign of her has been lost..

She stands on the beach
No one sees her but me
Just a vision from my soul
Just who I want to be..

Copyright © Embracing_Darkness ... [ 2004-12-07 04:13:28]
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Re: Arianah (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:15:02 AM AEST
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You have such a beautiful way with words, so mezmerising in your choices, full of color and life...yet written in sadness..awesome poem.

Re: Arianah (User Rating: 1 )
by N0body on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:49:26 PM AEST
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Nice. Neat concept.

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