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Array ( [sid] => 74708 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Neglect [time] => 2004-12-07 02:43:23 [hometext] => Got a little sad one day and started writting (don't worry I don't REALLY feel this way)... [bodytext] => She stands in the empty room, the darkness now creeps near
And there alone, without a friend, she sheds her final tear
Her strength, love and happiness, murdered by their hate
The lies & deceit have filled her up and now have sealed her fate

Quiet and alone, engulfed in a shadow
A dark, silent, consuming shadow
Its arms they bind her, its comfort she craves
Darkness overwhelms her, like soft calming waves

The shadow of dusk whispers, but silence
It carries her away from the pain and the violence
The cruel blackened world fades into greyness
The life she once had has left her nameless

The room now more than empty, all life has left it bare
The body that once was living has fallen in despair
No one will ever find her there; her tear will not be shared
They won’t know the hopes she had because no one ever cared. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Amaterian_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Neglect

Contributed by Amaterian_Angel on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:43:23 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

She stands in the empty room, the darkness now creeps near
And there alone, without a friend, she sheds her final tear
Her strength, love and happiness, murdered by their hate
The lies & deceit have filled her up and now have sealed her fate

Quiet and alone, engulfed in a shadow
A dark, silent, consuming shadow
Its arms they bind her, its comfort she craves
Darkness overwhelms her, like soft calming waves

The shadow of dusk whispers, but silence
It carries her away from the pain and the violence
The cruel blackened world fades into greyness
The life she once had has left her nameless

The room now more than empty, all life has left it bare
The body that once was living has fallen in despair
No one will ever find her there; her tear will not be shared
They won’t know the hopes she had because no one ever cared.

Copyright Â© Amaterian_Angel ... [ 2004-12-07 02:43:23]
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Re: Neglect (User Rating: 1 )
by Embracing_Darkness on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 04:41:36 AM AEST
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Wooooooow! This is really awesome, and you apparently didn't even feel this way, yet you've come up with something so deep and upsetting anyway..good job! =)

Re: Neglect (User Rating: 1 )
by n2dep2care on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 10:19:58 AM AEST
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This write is very overwhelming and soul impacting. Powerful and sad. Wonderful job!

Laurie

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