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Array ( [sid] => 74689 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => SHE CUTS [time] => 2004-12-06 22:23:38 [hometext] => May this show her that I love her To my wife MaDonna [bodytext] => As she cut blood flowed
Time was slowed
Tears were seen
Is her love a dream.

He tries
He knows the pain
He understands the bleeding is not just a game
It a part of life not to die just to feel alive.

Within a world of shame.

She bleeds silent tears
She cuts her fears
His love for her is ever so dear
His love is for her it's not a dream.

He only wishes she could see
His dream
His dream is her

She can not see through
Her sadness
Her shame
The darkness
The fear she has

He knows of it more than she knows
Lonely Rejected Unwanted Ugly
But if she could only see what he see's

Apart Togetherness Wanted beautiful
Tears of perfect peace
She has given him
The joy he has searched for all his days

Her beauty is seen
Her love is felt
Let her know this
Let her see this
Let her know he loves her more than life it's self.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

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SHE CUTS

Contributed by lemmen on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:23:38 PM in AEST
Topic: DreamsandWishes

As she cut blood flowed
Time was slowed
Tears were seen
Is her love a dream.

He tries
He knows the pain
He understands the bleeding is not just a game
It a part of life not to die just to feel alive.

Within a world of shame.

She bleeds silent tears
She cuts her fears
His love for her is ever so dear
His love is for her it's not a dream.

He only wishes she could see
His dream
His dream is her

She can not see through
Her sadness
Her shame
The darkness
The fear she has

He knows of it more than she knows
Lonely Rejected Unwanted Ugly
But if she could only see what he see's

Apart Togetherness Wanted beautiful
Tears of perfect peace
She has given him
The joy he has searched for all his days

Her beauty is seen
Her love is felt
Let her know this
Let her see this
Let her know he loves her more than life it's self.

BY DENNIS LEMMEN

Copyright © lemmen ... [ 2004-12-06 22:23:38]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: SHE CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 10:55:15 PM AEST
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great write... liked it a lot... hope she'll be able to c how much u love her...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes

Re: SHE CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 01:36:31 AM AEST
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Very powerfull yet luving write.
A masterpiece.
luv, huggs, faith, hope,
emy

Re: SHE CUTS (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 11:24:17 AM AEST
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Very emotionally powerful... great care and love flow from the words thus you wrote and I hope she will see that she has someone who loves her very much..

~ :: christina :: ~

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