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The Inkwell is Filled
Contributed by
eyesxcriedxout1989
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Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:14:18 PM in AEST
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Tears drip
Blood spills
Eloquently falling
The crimson poured into
The inkwell
Of so carefully misspelt words
Percieved, is the idea of confusion
Percieved as if every tear
Was dealt with alone
Dying alone
But passing through the inkwell
And intermingling with the blood
Just as black as the heart from which it spilled
Just as black as the ink before
Blood will fill that inkwell
Along with tears
Meaningless, careless tears
Thoughts of love
And broken years
Years reckoned dead
Like the afflicted moth
Borne to the wind
Wind that carries everything
So that, too, will be
Mixed into the well
So everything will be written
As the poets pen is drowned
In the inkwell
Copyright ©
eyesxcriedxout1989
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2004-12-06 16:14:18]
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Re: The Inkwell is Filled
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by bonita2689 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:42:10 PM AEST
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| This a really interesting premise for a poem but it turned out beautifully. Nicely done |
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Re: The Inkwell is Filled
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by EVERxSOxSWEET on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:03:35 PM AEST
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everything you write is awsome mason...im envious..
Much love!
Kaylee |
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Re: The Inkwell is Filled
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by SkaterGirl16 on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:51:18 PM AEST
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| Lovely :) |
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Re: The Inkwell is Filled
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by theMoth on
Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 03:26:29 PM AEST
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Another good write.
I like the use of the inkwell
and the poet drowned in it.
You have good ideas
and express them very well
in your poetry.
--Mothy |
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Re: The Inkwell is Filled
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Saturday, 11th December 2004 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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| thank you mason, placing me into such an excellent poem is an honor i do not deserve. |
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