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Mistake
Contributed by
jishes_4_ever
on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:04:12 PM in AEST
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It was just one party
Just one night
Just one drink
That turned into 10
I meant to stop after 1
But it was so good
I had to have another one
I kept on drinking
Til I felt I could hold no more
I wasn't thinking when I drove home that night
I got in my car
I thought I was fine
But I didn't see the other car comming
Now I'm lying here
Slowly dieing
I hear them say the others are dead
And hate myself for killing them
It was my fault
I didn't mean to do it
I didn't think this would happen
Now as I lay here
Waiting for the time it'll all be over
I realize this is it
After today I'll be gone forever
I'm sorry God for all I've done
Please forgive me
I didn't mean to kill them
I wasn't thinking
It was all a mistake
"We're losing her" I hear someone say
I guess this is it
It's over now
With one last breath
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2004-12-06 16:04:12]
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Re: Mistake
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by LilGnefkow on
Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:23:57 PM AEST
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