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although they cannot be heard
I lie awake at night to think of razorblades
and their sweet kiss
tears stream silently down my cheeks
as I can feel myself silently scream out in pain
although I cannot be heard
it's so hard to breathe
because inside the pain is burning
searing my heart, and blacking my soul
the cuts turning crimson
as the blood dries
I lie awake at night to think of razorblades
and their sweet kiss
blood streams silently down my arm
no one can see it collect in little pools
as I fall to the ground
so weak and full of despair
the tears no longer fall
and I grow weaker
then I die, a sweet suicide
of a razorblade's kiss
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A Razorblade's Kiss

Contributed by screwup on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:02:57 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

swallowed up in the sounds of me screaming
although they cannot be heard
I lie awake at night to think of razorblades
and their sweet kiss
tears stream silently down my cheeks
as I can feel myself silently scream out in pain
although I cannot be heard
it's so hard to breathe
because inside the pain is burning
searing my heart, and blacking my soul
the cuts turning crimson
as the blood dries
I lie awake at night to think of razorblades
and their sweet kiss
blood streams silently down my arm
no one can see it collect in little pools
as I fall to the ground
so weak and full of despair
the tears no longer fall
and I grow weaker
then I die, a sweet suicide
of a razorblade's kiss

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Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Jishes_4_ever on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:06:38 PM AEST
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very good... great write...

hope to c more from u soon

Jishes

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by LilGnefkow on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 04:12:24 PM AEST
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wow...this is really really good.

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Amaterian_Angel on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 02:53:22 AM AEST
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Love your poem! Very discriptive! but ummm... smile! (^_^)

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 06:02:20 AM AEST
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We kiss and dance the same...the path of agonies our paths entwined in pain...
Beautiful write ~Dee~ as always you write what you feel...showing the agonies of whats happening...so hard to read...but knowing only you can break the cycle we dance.

Im back yet unsure as to why...sadly things have changed and my dam email box is driving me nutz....im not getting my maillll.....till to late....hope you enjoyed thanks giving what ever that is.

Catch u up

Karl

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 09:06:24 AM AEST
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amazinlgy written, but so very sad, a desperate write *hugs*

pixie xx

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by killingmehslowly on Tuesday, 7th December 2004 @ 05:10:13 PM AEST
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i love it. i like alot of things, but it's rare for me to say i love it. But i can relate...good poem. keep writing

Re: A Razorblade's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Tuesday, 26th April 2005 @ 07:40:29 AM AEST
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excellent work!!!!

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