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Array ( [sid] => 74620 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A MOTHER'S LAST WISH [time] => 2004-12-06 11:44:51 [hometext] => i wrote this song this morning. please tell me what you think of it! [bodytext] => a mother's last wish

it was raining hard this morning
when i got up to get the kids off
i could hardly see the road to drive
it was poring down ,so hard ,at times

as i was turnin right, on macon road
another car, turned upside down
i stopped to maybe offer help
and that's when i found out

crumbled inside was a baby girl
some how she made it, God spared her life
i checked her mama's pulse and then
she whispered soft and weak and barely alive

please take care of, my little baby girl
she has no one else
in this world
all the loved ones in my life
passed on so long ago

please tell her mama loved her
and i really didn't wanna go
but Jesus has a better plan
and if she asks: how will i know?

just tell her
Jesus, gave your mama wings
and she'll be with in your dreams
just like when you dream of dad
i'll be right there in your bed

so please take care of
my little baby girl

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A MOTHER'S LAST WISH

Contributed by MMISS on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 11:44:51 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

a mother's last wish

it was raining hard this morning
when i got up to get the kids off
i could hardly see the road to drive
it was poring down ,so hard ,at times

as i was turnin right, on macon road
another car, turned upside down
i stopped to maybe offer help
and that's when i found out

crumbled inside was a baby girl
some how she made it, God spared her life
i checked her mama's pulse and then
she whispered soft and weak and barely alive

please take care of, my little baby girl
she has no one else
in this world
all the loved ones in my life
passed on so long ago

please tell her mama loved her
and i really didn't wanna go
but Jesus has a better plan
and if she asks: how will i know?

just tell her
Jesus, gave your mama wings
and she'll be with in your dreams
just like when you dream of dad
i'll be right there in your bed

so please take care of
my little baby girl

Copyright © MMISS ... [ 2004-12-06 11:44:51]
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Re: A MOTHER'S LAST WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by Pepper on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:19:50 PM AEST
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That was very touching and sweet. Good write!

Re: A MOTHER'S LAST WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by Jakenstein on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:29:12 PM AEST
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I like this song.....as a song writer myself i find it harder and harder to keep comming up with new ideas to write about....it's a great song....although i could use a chorus...other than then it's wonderful...nice job

Re: A MOTHER'S LAST WISH (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 02:00:56 PM AEST
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yes you're so right about the verse! it actually is not at the final stage as of yett. i decided to sub it to see if it took. thanks so much for your helpful comments. great day to you!

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