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Array ( [sid] => 74609 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Give Me A Reason [time] => 2004-12-06 09:08:19 [hometext] => I'll never forget you; just let me go. - M. Holt [bodytext] => Hello...
My angel...
My seraph...
(MY DEMON)

Hello...
My everything...
My sweetness...
(MY AFFLICTION)

I TOOK YOU THERE
I LET YOU IN
I BROKE THE LOCK
YOU CAN'T PRETEND

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)


Goodbye...
My comfort...
My iris...
(MY ASHES)

Goodbye...
My lovely...
My one & only...
(MY VESTIGE)

I TOUCHED YOUR FACE
I SWAM RIGHT THROUGH
I LEFT MY TRACE
YOU CAN'T CONFUSE

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)


In that blackened room
That you've locked up
Your clandestine truths
Covered in smut
Its grinning there
Shining through
You're so unaware
Of who's inside you...

LET IT GO
SO I
CAN FALL AWAY
LET IT GO
CAUSE
I DON'T WANT
TO STAY

I TOOK YOU THERE
I LET YOU IN
I BROKE THE LOCK
YOU CAN'T PRETEND

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

YOU
(GAVE ME A REASON...)

I'LL KILL YOU
I'VE CULLED YOU
- LET ME OUT - [comments] => 2 [counter] => 193 [topic] => 6 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
Give Me A Reason

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:08:19 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Hello...
My angel...
My seraph...
(MY DEMON)

Hello...
My everything...
My sweetness...
(MY AFFLICTION)

I TOOK YOU THERE
I LET YOU IN
I BROKE THE LOCK
YOU CAN'T PRETEND

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)


Goodbye...
My comfort...
My iris...
(MY ASHES)

Goodbye...
My lovely...
My one & only...
(MY VESTIGE)

I TOUCHED YOUR FACE
I SWAM RIGHT THROUGH
I LEFT MY TRACE
YOU CAN'T CONFUSE

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)


In that blackened room
That you've locked up
Your clandestine truths
Covered in smut
Its grinning there
Shining through
You're so unaware
Of who's inside you...

LET IT GO
SO I
CAN FALL AWAY
LET IT GO
CAUSE
I DON'T WANT
TO STAY

I TOOK YOU THERE
I LET YOU IN
I BROKE THE LOCK
YOU CAN'T PRETEND

THAT, THAT MEANT NOTHING TO YOU
(CALL ME A BASTARD)
AND THAT IT ALL WAS UNTRUE
(GIVE ME A REASON)
AND THAT MY EYES SINKING BLUE
(SO I'M A BASTARD!?)
HOOKED YOU AND MADE YOU ONE USED
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(GIVE ME A REASON...)
(TO CULL MY DEMON)

YOU
(GAVE ME A REASON...)

I'LL KILL YOU
I'VE CULLED YOU
- LET ME OUT -




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2004-12-06 09:08:19]
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Re: Give Me A Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by Jakenstein on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:38:26 PM AEST
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Very emotional write....nice job...i liked it!


Re: Give Me A Reason (User Rating: 1 )
by EternalNight4x on Thursday, 16th December 2004 @ 09:02:00 PM AEST
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excellent well expressed write... I liked the repetaing verses/stanza's...well great job keep up the great writes




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