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Grips my throat so tight,
Tells me that I’ll die alone,
He’ll come back when no-one’s at home.

I am scared to close my eyes,
He creeps up hidden in many a disguise,
I can feel his breath upon my skin,
I know against the dark lord I can not win.

He threatens that if I ever tell,
That I will spend an eternity in hell,
So I keep my mouth shut as I am in fear,
He is always whispering into my ear.

My soul feels like it is being torn,
I feel like a new horror is being born,
I can feel it all around me, haunting me,
From this terror I’ll never be free.

Tonight I don’t think that I will sleep,
Because into my bed the dark lord will creep,
Fill my head with fear & darkness,
As he tells me compared to others I am worthless.

He lives to torment its how he gets his kicks,
He has almost burnt away my entire wick,
He laughs in my face, begging me to cry,
He rips away my soul & tosses it into the sky.

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He Comes To Me At Night

Contributed by pixie on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:20:19 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

He comes to me at night,
Grips my throat so tight,
Tells me that I’ll die alone,
He’ll come back when no-one’s at home.

I am scared to close my eyes,
He creeps up hidden in many a disguise,
I can feel his breath upon my skin,
I know against the dark lord I can not win.

He threatens that if I ever tell,
That I will spend an eternity in hell,
So I keep my mouth shut as I am in fear,
He is always whispering into my ear.

My soul feels like it is being torn,
I feel like a new horror is being born,
I can feel it all around me, haunting me,
From this terror I’ll never be free.

Tonight I don’t think that I will sleep,
Because into my bed the dark lord will creep,
Fill my head with fear & darkness,
As he tells me compared to others I am worthless.

He lives to torment its how he gets his kicks,
He has almost burnt away my entire wick,
He laughs in my face, begging me to cry,
He rips away my soul & tosses it into the sky.

Copyright Â© pixie ... [ 2004-12-06 06:20:19]
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Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:24:48 AM AEST
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He's not a very nice man at all is he? great writing once again pix.

johnny.

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:35:52 AM AEST
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I know this dark lord...when he comes to you at night just poke him in his eye. He aint so bad with only one good peeper ;o)

Great dark write my friend
Roses
Larry

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 07:59:37 AM AEST
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wow this is so dark, once again you have just blown me away with your poetry.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:03:00 AM AEST
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your poems keep me reading always..i love this one..

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by katyqueen35 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:19:05 AM AEST
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Wow pix dear this write is dark very dark.
Great job.

hugs

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by MMISS on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:21:10 AM AEST
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hope this is fiction cause it so scary. i'd be afraid to go to sleep too! great stuff.

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:24:49 AM AEST
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To think I have been classed as a dark lord...hmmm definately time to find a new identie lol...cool write, nice and freaky...chilling and painted in fear...beautifully written.

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by CrimsonTears on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 06:48:23 PM AEST
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another great write pixie......awesome job....i absolutely loved it......fantastic poem..

Lots of Love
CrimsonTears

Re: He Comes To Me At Night (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 08:49:05 PM AEST
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very creepy and emotional. I loved this very
wonderfully and oddly enough beautifully
written.

Bobo (Joel)

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