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Array ( [sid] => 74570 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => My daddy killed yours ova a colour [time] => 2004-12-06 00:55:22 [hometext] => this aint really a poem but means sumthin special to me. any ex/gangters will know what im talkin bout. [bodytext] => A lil boy down the street
says you killed his daddy in his sleep,
is it true dad,
did you do that deed?

I told him he was wrong
you would neva do no harm.
He sed it was ova a colour,
I asked is that really sumthin to fight ova.
He sed no to you or me
but obvisously that is how our family thinks,
see yours has a different colour to mine
and so we have to stay on our own line.
If they knew i was talkin to you
I would get mine.

So come at night and we talk,
but if they knew...we would have a fight.
The lil boy sed don thate your dad
coz I dont,
he did what he felt was respectin his own.
Yeah i miss my daddy
but all this fightin ova a colour
I don tmiss that no more.
So if nuthin else,
please learn a lesson,
a colour is no reason to be stressin,
its no reason to kil or be killed
no reason to walk the streets.
All it is...is sumthin outa outa a crayon box.
So go home and colour a picture
with every crayon you got
then put daddys number on top.
They should let him have it.
Make sure no stickers just a stamp
maybe then he will see,
that colour isnt how it has to be. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 183 [topic] => 31 [informant] => bluebird [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )
My daddy killed yours ova a colour

Contributed by bluebird on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:55:22 AM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry



A lil boy down the street
says you killed his daddy in his sleep,
is it true dad,
did you do that deed?

I told him he was wrong
you would neva do no harm.
He sed it was ova a colour,
I asked is that really sumthin to fight ova.
He sed no to you or me
but obvisously that is how our family thinks,
see yours has a different colour to mine
and so we have to stay on our own line.
If they knew i was talkin to you
I would get mine.

So come at night and we talk,
but if they knew...we would have a fight.
The lil boy sed don thate your dad
coz I dont,
he did what he felt was respectin his own.
Yeah i miss my daddy
but all this fightin ova a colour
I don tmiss that no more.
So if nuthin else,
please learn a lesson,
a colour is no reason to be stressin,
its no reason to kil or be killed
no reason to walk the streets.
All it is...is sumthin outa outa a crayon box.
So go home and colour a picture
with every crayon you got
then put daddys number on top.
They should let him have it.
Make sure no stickers just a stamp
maybe then he will see,
that colour isnt how it has to be.




Copyright © bluebird ... [ 2004-12-06 00:55:22]
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Re: My daddy killed yours ova a colour (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:17:48 AM AEST
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An astounding write! Very strong, deep.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: My daddy killed yours ova a colour (User Rating: 1 )
by noid_schizoid on Monday, 20th December 2004 @ 02:47:26 AM AEST
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Excellent in every regard. I like the fact that you aren't restricted by a form or scheme. This indeed IS a poem, and the message is powerful.




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