Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!
Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com    Poems On Site: 198,500+   Comments On Poems: 427,000+   Forum Posts: 105,000+
Custom Search
  Welcome ! Home  ·  FAQ  ·  Topics  ·  Web Links  ·  Your Account  ·  Submit Poetry  ·  Top 30  ·  OldSite Link 29-May 14:58:14 AEST  
  Menu
  Home
· Micks Shop
· Our eBay Store· Error Submit
 Poetry
· Submit Poetry
· Least Read Poems
· Topics
· Members Listing
· Old Site Post 2001
· Old Site Pre 2001
· Poetry Archive
· Public Domain Poetry
 Stories
· Stories (NEW ! )
· Submit Story
· Story Topics
· Stories Archive
· Story Search
  Community
· Our Poetry Forums
· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

  Site Help
· FAQ
· Feedback

  Members Areas
· Your Account
· Members Journals
· Premium Sign-Up
  Premium Section
· Special Section
· Premium Poems
· Premium Submit
· Premium Search
· Premium Top
· Premium Archive
· Premium Topics
 Fun & Games

· Jokes
· Bubble Puzzle
· ConnectN
· Cross Word
· Cross Word Easy
· Drag Puzzle
· Word Hunt
 Reference
· Dictionary
· Dictionary (Rhyming)
· Site Updates
· Content
· Special Content
 Search
· Search
· Web Links
· All Links
 Top
· Top 30
  Help This Site
· Donations
 Others
· Recipes
· Moderators
Our Other Sites
· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

  Social

Array ( [sid] => 74563 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Opaque [time] => 2004-12-06 00:09:57 [hometext] => Impenetrable by light; neither transparent nor translucent [bodytext] => Smile yet feel fear
Sad yet shed no tear
Happy yet about to cry
In turmoil, yet unsure why

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

Hating yet feeling compassion
Abeyant yet on a mission
Lost yet somehow found
Always here yet never arround

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

You can try to see past my false face
You can try to give me your solace
You can try to look at my insides
You can try to seek what I do hide

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

You cant see through my soul's shell
You cant get through my soul's hell
You cant find the true me
You cant see who I am truly

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You will never AGAIN see who I truly am
You will never AGAIN know if I can
You will never AGAIN be my friend
You will never AGAIN be my end

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

I will never AGAIN let someone inside
I will never AGAIN show what I did hide
I will never AGAIN leave my self open
I will never AGAIN be the one hopin

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

I will never AGAIN feel the same
You will never AGAIN be my shame
No one will ever AGAIN know if I care
......because feelings......... I can no longer share

I was transparent
I was translucent
You got inside me
You saw right through me [comments] => 3 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 24 [informant] => kyletycz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Opaque

Contributed by kyletycz on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:09:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Smile yet feel fear
Sad yet shed no tear
Happy yet about to cry
In turmoil, yet unsure why

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

Hating yet feeling compassion
Abeyant yet on a mission
Lost yet somehow found
Always here yet never arround

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

You can try to see past my false face
You can try to give me your solace
You can try to look at my insides
You can try to seek what I do hide

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

You cant see through my soul's shell
You cant get through my soul's hell
You cant find the true me
You cant see who I am truly

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

You will never AGAIN see who I truly am
You will never AGAIN know if I can
You will never AGAIN be my friend
You will never AGAIN be my end

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

I will never AGAIN let someone inside
I will never AGAIN show what I did hide
I will never AGAIN leave my self open
I will never AGAIN be the one hopin

Im not transparent
Im not translucent
You cant get in me
You cant see through me

I will never AGAIN feel the same
You will never AGAIN be my shame
No one will ever AGAIN know if I care
......because feelings......... I can no longer share

I was transparent
I was translucent
You got inside me
You saw right through me




Copyright © kyletycz ... [ 2004-12-06 00:09:57]
(Date/Time posted on site)





Advertisments:






Previous Posted Poem         | |         Next Posted Poem


 
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.
Re: Opaque (User Rating: 1 )
by Doriens_Picture on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 12:34:45 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
i would never try to see a person just in them


Re: Opaque (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:33:55 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
Very strong masterepice.
Very creatively written.
luv, huggs,
emy


Re: Opaque (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th December 2004 @ 03:04:42 PM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)
I can feel the emotion coming through this powerful write. Great job.




While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com