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Array ( [sid] => 74547 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => MY FIRST LOVE [time] => 2004-12-05 21:49:32 [hometext] => It is the first delicious night, with the hope of many yet to come........ [bodytext] => Waking in the morning sun
With the weight of your body on mine...
The constant pounding of your heartbeat is best
When it matches the rhythm of my breast...
Contemplating our love of not long past
Savoring this moment, hoping to make it last
Remembering your touch
Like that of a gentle breeze against one's face
So... so, soft, and it pleased me so much...
Now above me you are stirring
All of our desire from last night reoccurring...
Lying there feeling the strength of your embrace
Becoming oblivious to all time and place...
Gazing deep into your eyes
It seems your lust you cannot disguise...
In your eyes I see a reflection of what is in my heart
Knowing that it has always been there from the very start...
Creeping like a thief in the night...love has slowly
Taken a hold, and has control of both our souls...
The words so sweet you whisper, only for my ears
Has now succeeded in erasing each and every fear...
And now as I am turning to look at the morning sun
I realize we are like this new day...
We have just begun

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MY FIRST LOVE

Contributed by summerwine on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:49:32 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Waking in the morning sun
With the weight of your body on mine...
The constant pounding of your heartbeat is best
When it matches the rhythm of my breast...
Contemplating our love of not long past
Savoring this moment, hoping to make it last
Remembering your touch
Like that of a gentle breeze against one's face
So... so, soft, and it pleased me so much...
Now above me you are stirring
All of our desire from last night reoccurring...
Lying there feeling the strength of your embrace
Becoming oblivious to all time and place...
Gazing deep into your eyes
It seems your lust you cannot disguise...
In your eyes I see a reflection of what is in my heart
Knowing that it has always been there from the very start...
Creeping like a thief in the night...love has slowly
Taken a hold, and has control of both our souls...
The words so sweet you whisper, only for my ears
Has now succeeded in erasing each and every fear...
And now as I am turning to look at the morning sun
I realize we are like this new day...
We have just begun





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Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:52:42 PM AEST
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Absolutely, positively beautiful..... I hope you have many more nights like these...
Jenni


Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:29:18 AM AEST
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This is so romantic, hope you have more of this hun. Great write.

Hugs,
Jane


Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchCorpuz on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 09:39:56 AM AEST
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It's amazing how you can put a single moment into a beautiful writing.
Great work!

-Butch


Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingkk05 on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 01:13:43 PM AEST
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Love is great and it's just like this poem. I think it's great how you turned one night of passion that was beautiful to you and then wrote it down and shared the beauty with us.


Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Friday, 17th December 2004 @ 05:09:16 AM AEST
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You bring that very first love back to me
I read your poem and could hardly breath
Keep writing gurl you have a way with words
Sinned


Re: MY FIRST LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by frozenintime on Sunday, 19th December 2004 @ 01:37:38 PM AEST
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it's really amazing..good job




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