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Because I was going to visit you for your birthday
We were also going to Disneyland
Which also was something I was looking forward to
But once we arrived
You acted so cruel
You really hurt me when you made fun of me
Laughed and said a lot of mean things
I couldn't wait until we got to leave
And didn't understand why you would do this to me
Now that I'm home
I just sit alone
Ready to cry
Because I don't know why
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So Mean

Contributed by UnlovedChild on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:18:29 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

I was so excited
Because I was going to visit you for your birthday
We were also going to Disneyland
Which also was something I was looking forward to
But once we arrived
You acted so cruel
You really hurt me when you made fun of me
Laughed and said a lot of mean things
I couldn't wait until we got to leave
And didn't understand why you would do this to me
Now that I'm home
I just sit alone
Ready to cry
Because I don't know why
You were so mean to me

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Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:43:34 PM AEST
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aww this is sad but very well expressed.. someday he will learn to treat you better .. no one deserves to be made fun of .. Your a good person

great write
PEace and hope
JENNI

Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by Hollie85 on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 09:55:47 PM AEST
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Men can be so cruel. I am sure alot of women on this site could relate to your poem - well written and to the point.

Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:28:42 PM AEST
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I have always felt people who 'put down' others, have the problem, not you... Don't be sad, the next time you see him think of him with floppy ears, and a fuzzy tail (like the dog that he is) and it might bring a smile to your face...

Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 10:41:33 PM AEST
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Awww I'm so sorry hun.....
Hugs
Jenni
P/S Summerwine is right...lol

Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:19:17 AM AEST
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Amy this is such a sad write, i know that you have been looking forward to that visit. Im so sorry it didnt work out. Dont worry it'll be his loss hun.

Hugs,
Jane

Re: So Mean (User Rating: 1 )
by Rxqueen on Monday, 6th December 2004 @ 05:24:23 AM AEST
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Aww, sweetness, I am so sorry, I know how excited you were. What a poo your dad was!!!! I hope you fell better girly! You know we all love ya and are here for you. Good write by the way.

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