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not know
Contributed by
sidra
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Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 01:45:21 PM in AEST
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oops
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My thoughts of you run deeper than an ocean,
My desires for your touch arouse my emotions.
Only my heart knows the truth within,
Will we be lovers or friends?
Your smile always brightens my day,
As always, I don't know what to say.
A heart that beats hard and fast,
I pray our love will last.
I dream of you holding me near,
All these feelings I do not fear.
I wish that you could be by my side,
To kiss me gently as we watch the tide.
I dream of you every day and night,
and conceal my love inside so tight.
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sidra
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2004-12-05 13:45:21]
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Re: not know
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 02:12:47 PM AEST
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Awww, I like this. Short and very sweet.
*sigh*
I think we've all felt something similar to this in the past...
Anyway, great write, the rhyme breaks down a little bit in a couple of places, but that is the only thing I can really say.
*hugs* Phil xxx |
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Re: not know
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:11:01 PM AEST
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| I use to felt this way but now I don't but I could relate so very well, Great Write, I hope you and the person you love, well be together. |
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