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mathematicly determined reality,
the bounding linearity of life,
nature's brutality.

a moment...
spent with you, no clock
can meassure, the eternity
of love and pleasure.

a moment...
all alone... either too short,
either much too long...
whatever you do is wrong,
you're out of time,
no matter the effort.

i need more time
to live... to laugh, to cry,
to make a difference
I NEED MORE TIME.


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Time

Contributed by keugeot on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 06:18:53 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



time...
mathematicly determined reality,
the bounding linearity of life,
nature's brutality.

a moment...
spent with you, no clock
can meassure, the eternity
of love and pleasure.

a moment...
all alone... either too short,
either much too long...
whatever you do is wrong,
you're out of time,
no matter the effort.

i need more time
to live... to laugh, to cry,
to make a difference
I NEED MORE TIME.






Copyright © keugeot ... [ 2004-12-05 06:18:53]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Baronhawk on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 08:40:28 AM AEST
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Cool concept...time the eternal river indeed. I agree with you "I NEED MORE TIME". But I guarantee you that if given more time we would still waste it...and do everything all the same...for we humans lack any appreciation of the great chance that is our lives....


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Summerwine on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 11:35:04 AM AEST
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You hit the nail on the head! I don't have enough time . look in the mirror hmmm...there's too much time on that face, need to make time, I want more time too! I loved this...thx


Re: Time (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 03:24:54 PM AEST
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Great write....Thanks for sharing it..
Jenni




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