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Array ( [sid] => 74466 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Pieces of Me. [time] => 2004-12-05 04:12:16 [hometext] => Put yourself into my shoes. Understand what it's like to feel. [bodytext] => Where should I being my poem,
when it's contents hurt me so?
I guess I should just being to say
that there is something you should know.

I never wanted to hurt you,
that never was my plan.
But I just can't sit back and watch
when there's so much I don't understand.

Yes I have turned my back on you
but the bigger picture you need to see.
All I tried to do was help.
It was you who turned your back on me.

I apologize for all I have done
and I want to make it right.
Please know I will not stand back
and let you lose this fight.

You have fought so hard all your life
and now you just give in?
Wasn't it you who tought me,
never to stop until you win?

You don't deserve this life you live,
there is so much more for you.
And when I look into your eyes,
I know you know it's true.

Help is always there for you
if that's what you seek to find.
But when you run in circles,
you're always a step behind.

So I guess this poem is my hand
and I will hold it out to you.
I will give you time to think about it
and decide what you need to do.

I cannot make your choices for you,
if I could then you'd be free.
There would be no more painful teardrops
for I would place your burden on me.

Though this is not the case,
I need you to understand.
I love you more than words can say,
so please reach out and take my hand.

I will lead you on this journey
and we will make it through.
Together we will pick up the pieces
and put the picture together too.

Do you know what I am saying?
Well, it's coming from the heart.
Thus begins a new chapter.
A fresh and untouched start. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 201 [topic] => 61 [informant] => Broken_Wingz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Pieces of Me.

Contributed by Broken_Wingz on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 04:12:16 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Where should I being my poem,
when it's contents hurt me so?
I guess I should just being to say
that there is something you should know.

I never wanted to hurt you,
that never was my plan.
But I just can't sit back and watch
when there's so much I don't understand.

Yes I have turned my back on you
but the bigger picture you need to see.
All I tried to do was help.
It was you who turned your back on me.

I apologize for all I have done
and I want to make it right.
Please know I will not stand back
and let you lose this fight.

You have fought so hard all your life
and now you just give in?
Wasn't it you who tought me,
never to stop until you win?

You don't deserve this life you live,
there is so much more for you.
And when I look into your eyes,
I know you know it's true.

Help is always there for you
if that's what you seek to find.
But when you run in circles,
you're always a step behind.

So I guess this poem is my hand
and I will hold it out to you.
I will give you time to think about it
and decide what you need to do.

I cannot make your choices for you,
if I could then you'd be free.
There would be no more painful teardrops
for I would place your burden on me.

Though this is not the case,
I need you to understand.
I love you more than words can say,
so please reach out and take my hand.

I will lead you on this journey
and we will make it through.
Together we will pick up the pieces
and put the picture together too.

Do you know what I am saying?
Well, it's coming from the heart.
Thus begins a new chapter.
A fresh and untouched start.

Copyright © Broken_Wingz ... [ 2004-12-05 04:12:16]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Pieces of Me. (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 5th December 2004 @ 07:31:04 AM AEST
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wow that was deep, well written and expressed,

pixie xx

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